10 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2009 01:46 pm Title: You won everything
this was confusing at times, but I think I got it (:
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As you can see, I still have a lot to learn, and a lot to improve. Anyway, I'm glad you took the effort to read the story and review it. It means a lot. :D
Date: January 08, 2009 09:15 pm Title: You won everything
Nice, angst can be good. Great work
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you liked it. I often don't like angsty fics, but it seems it's the only thing I am capable of writing lol.
10 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2009 05:36 pm Title: You won everything
how wonderful!
oh man, i've never seen a fic like this one.
a++ for me
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am extremely glad you enjoyed it!
Date: January 08, 2009 04:02 pm Title: You won everything
You were born and you were raised and you went to school and you learned things. They told you to be polite. They told you to be faithful. They told you to avoid making mistakes. They trained you to be the perfect human being.
They would probably judge you now if they knew what you’ve done. They’d probably desert you and ban you from their lives.
You were taught to love and you were taught to help.
You were always bound to do the right thing.
Now you know that’s not true.
Now you know that all of that is a lie.
That was single handedly one of the most gorgeous paragraphs I've ever read. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it because English is not mother tongue so I'm always reluctant about posting fics. Thanks for the review.