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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1

It's fantastic how you've captured each of their dilemmas here. Great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - and I'm loving your Paper Princess story!

Reviewer: twentythree Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 08:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Man, I had a hard enough time typing after reading this. If this story isn't finished soon, I might just explode. Finish soon, please. This is awesome!

Author's Response: hee hee!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1

You are so good at this.  Loving it so much!!!  Bring on the smut:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:59 am Title: Chapter 4

I love Michael being grown-up enough to play matchmaker.  I love playful and steamy Jim and Pam.  Nice story!


Author's Response: I love it when they show us Michael's grown up side, too.  S.Carell breaks my heart every time.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:50 am Title: Chapter 4

So I have a weakness for the sexy-lanky-leaning thing….”

I love that line.  You should start a new thread at TWOP with that. 



Author's Response: It was a definite shout-out to my JK Hussies! :o)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh I love Jon asleep on the couch. I can just picture it.

Author's Response: Mmm, can't you just?  I just got through watching an old episode of Felicity, and I swear, Scott Foley just....to me looks like he could so be JK's brother!  Ah, if only...

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:36 am Title: Chapter 2

go Pam go

Author's Response: Hee!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:32 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to get to chap.2.  This is wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 05:42 am Title: Chapter 4

I'm going to being waiting impatiently for the afternoon to come, now. You are a tease! Haha, just kidding, but god, you have no idea how excited I am for the next chapter. I'm anticipating hotness. Mmm.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it - thank you, as always, for being such a consistent and thoughtful reviewer!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4

Holy smoke. This is just what the doctor ordered. As always, you have me holding my breath for the next chapter - and not just because of the mounting steam (TWSS, I know.) Also such great banter and wistful, poignant, funny moments. Love the thought of Bob Vance's wedding vows including 'of Vance Refrigeration' and I think Michael as catalyst to bring them together is spot-on (don't know if it's just me, but I definitely thought that during the hotel room conversation in TC, they were setting him up to somehow, eventually play that role. Just like he quietly pulls off the big elusive paper sale, to everyone's astonishment.)

But I digress. Loving this story, please make more chapters soon. Needless to say, am looking forward to the forthcoming smut - which you always pull off to such great effect! (Also, as always, amazed at your sheer output of terrific stuff - I posted a story the other day that took me two weeks just to get the nerve to hit 'submit story' on. Must take a lesson in non-wussiness!)



Author's Response:

You leave the best reviews, you know, and I so appreciate them.  Speaking of, read your latest (need to leave a review & read it again, because I was in such a hurry), but I loved it.  Loved it that Jim makes love to her like he's afraid he'll lose her, because you could so picture that.

That sounded creepy - you know what I mean. :o)  You should never, ever hesitate to submit your stories; I have honestly not read one thing of yours that wasn't breathtaking and honestly quite poetic - seriously.  So post them ALL!

Thanks as always for the review!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start - I'm eager to read the next chapter!


Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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