10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2009 08:03 pm Title: Kiss the Girl
Whoa, cliffhanger!! Great chapter, really clever incorporation of the karaoke.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The karaoke scene in 'Email Surveillance' is probably one of my favorite scenes in during season two, so I had to work that in. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2009 03:54 pm Title: Kiss the Girl
Gosh, way to leave a cliff hanger!!
Author's Response: Holy Freaking Cliff Hanger Batman! Yeah, it's not usually my style to pull this kind of stunt, but this section leads into the next one nicely, I just decided to put a chapter break in. Thanks for reading :)
Date: March 11, 2009 03:44 pm Title: Kiss the Girl
Very cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, good, so I'm doing my job :) Thanks for reading!
Date: March 11, 2009 03:23 pm Title: Kiss the Girl
I really love this fic. It's just so cute. I can't wait to see if he asks her out and what happens next!!
Author's Response: Awww, Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: March 05, 2009 07:47 pm Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
Again, wonderful! I'm looking forward to see what happens as the week progresses.
I LOVED that you worked in the scene from the dojo, as well as all the other little tid bits from the show. Great job! =)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Glad to read you're still enjoying it :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2009 06:39 am Title: She's So Lovely
Nice story. The characters seem real, and themselves, in the AU setting. And you channeled Stanley in this chapter. I bet you only eat pretzels.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm happy you liked it. I hope no one throws garbage at me for this, but, um, I don't even like pretzels.
Date: March 02, 2009 09:07 am Title: She's So Lovely
Please update soon, I'm really enjoying this so far! :]
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: March 01, 2009 04:38 pm Title: She's So Lovely
I'm really, REALLY loving this! It's getting even better with each chapter. I'm seriously in love with your ability to write each character IN character but applied in your universe. Absolutely loving it and can't wait for the next chapter and for Jim and Pam to finally hook up :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. Hope you don't mind waiting a little for a hook up. They have a few hurdles to jump first. :)
Date: March 01, 2009 11:36 am Title: She's So Lovely
This is such a great story! The POVs are so well-written, I can hear Pam and Jim talking to me.
"...Seriously, Jim, if there were an award for longest engagement we would have won that."
I love that! :) I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I try really hard to get the characterization right, so I'm glad it's coming through for you.
9 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2009 03:06 am Title: She's So Lovely
I am totally into this story - can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Date: February 28, 2009 06:16 pm Title: She's So Lovely
"...probably could have been tightened more, but I was getting tired of tweaking it and wanted to move on..." TWSS! lol
I'm really enjoying this AU. You are creating a great balance between originality and staying true to the characters. Looking forward to seeing more :)
Author's Response: Wow, I wish I could say that I planned that TWSS but I totally didn't. I'm glad your enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing/reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2009 03:47 pm Title: Goodbye Stranger
This is just awesome. I love how you describe Pam's feelings, that she likes Jim after just one day, but isn't sure if it's just a crush or something more, and top that with Katy making a move on Jim right in front of her....great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, I didn't think it would be a Pam/Jim story without some self doubt and miscommunication. I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: February 24, 2009 09:10 am Title: Goodbye Stranger
Oh man, I'm really enjoying this story! You're doing such a great job incorporating the other characters and tweaking their histories from the show to fit your story. The Jim an Pam interaction is absolutely great and I could feel Pam's jealousy as she saw Jim talking to Katy. Great job, keep them coming!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I feel like this is just getting started, so I'm glad there's a few of you out there that want to read more. Thanks for reading :)
Date: February 21, 2009 07:37 am Title: The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything
I wasn't sure I was going to read this one. It's so cute. I love the combo of AU but still adding the things we all know and love from the show. Really great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the chance to read it. I'm glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 07:58 pm Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
As much as I love the show, I totally dig AU fics. I like taking the characters we know and love and throwing them into completely different scenarios. I'm really enjoying this little world you created and I can't wait to see what happens next. More soon, please?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading/reviewing. I love AU fics too. It's been a lot of fun to write and I'm glad people seem to be enjoying it so far. I'm a slow writer so updates probably will be more spaced out, but I do know exactly what I'm doing and where I'm going with this so I'll post as soon as I can pump stuff out (and as long as RL doesn't get in the way!)
Date: February 20, 2009 04:05 pm Title: The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything
God this is cute. I love the way you work in lines/ideas from the show, but in a completely new setting. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! My intention was/is to mirror the series but in an original and organic manner so I'm really glad it worked for you. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 11:57 am Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
This is excellent. I hope you continue. I like AUs so I think I'm going to be a big fan of this story :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words, I hope you enjoy the next part, which I just posted :)
Date: February 19, 2009 07:41 pm Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
I enjoyed this a lot! You wrote the characters really well. I love how Michael is Jan's personal assistant. What a great way to write him in! Great job, and I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I promise to get more up soon. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2009 07:28 pm Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
Oh, I love AU stories like this. Can't wait for more! And Ryan does the gift shop?! - HA!
Author's Response: Hi, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review :)
Date: February 18, 2009 11:20 am Title: An Old Fashioned Love Song
This was a really great start! I'm definitely intrigued. But I would suggest that you change the description of the story to gain more readers. Include that Pam is a PR person and that Jim is a reporter. Let people know exactly how A/U this fic is. Other than that, it's great!
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. I'll be sure to do that. I've never put up a story on any forum so I'm a little new to this.