9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2010 10:31 pm Title: The Dunder Mifflin School of Witchcraft and Papery
Awww...love this chapter (especially the HP reference.) So sweet to see the gradual fall of Jim Halpert for a certain receptionist. You wrote their flirtation and beginning of their friendship very convincing that I think this is exactly what must have happened before the camera showed up at DM-Scranton.
Also, it would be great if you can re-upload Chapter 5. Oh, and don't make us wait too long for the next chapter :D
9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2010 10:31 pm Title: The Decision
This is such a great idea, a story about Jim and Pam before they became JAM. The characters sound so much like their Season 1 selves so great job! Also, I love the little details that Jim first noticed about Pam (like how pretty she was when she smiled) as well as Jim having no choice but to take the DM's job offer.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 11:36 am Title: The Dunder Mifflin School of Witchcraft and Papery
Oh god, I love this story so much! Everyone's so great, and the last chapter had be rolling. Dwight's "BY GRIFFINDOR!" sounded in my head, and now I'm half tempted to run around saying it like a loser. :P
The slow burn of chemistry between Jim and Pam is lovely, really. Him gradually becoming enamoured with her, by little things like her attention or her compliments is just really sweet.
I really wish that you'd update soon. This is just a great story, and I'd hate to see it just sit here unfinished!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2009 12:41 pm Title: The Dunder Mifflin School of Witchcraft and Papery
oh, niiiiice (:
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 12:52 pm Title: Birth of a Salesman
Really enjoying this. Pl,ease continue. I can see all of it playing out exactly as you have portrayed :)
5 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 11:33 am Title: Birth of a Salesman
I really like this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! I can't wait to see what makes him realize that Pam is more than just the receptionist.
Date: March 06, 2009 06:52 pm Title: The Interview
Wonderful. You nailed Michael and Dwight, and I love seeing this new Jim and Pam that we've never really gotten to know--before the cameras came around. I love it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2009 04:47 pm Title: Birth of a Salesman
I really love reading these!
Date: March 03, 2009 01:23 pm Title: The Interview
awws, I see the beginning of a beautiful friendship (:
Date: March 02, 2009 04:05 pm Title: The Interview
This is REALLY good!!! Please continue!
Date: March 02, 2009 03:08 pm Title: The Interview
I'm looking forward to seeing a new side of Jim and Pam's relationship! Keep it up!
Date: March 02, 2009 02:48 pm Title: The Interview
I'm so excited! I always wanted to read a story like this! :D