1 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2020 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really? This is how you write drunk?
Hang on, I'm off to find some margarita mix.
8 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2009 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
So this is how you write when you're intoxicated, huh? Bravo! This was just lovely and so full of promise. Great job.
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2009 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so beautiful. I read it yesterday, but it really stuck with me even today, so I had to let you know!! This line is haunting and so true:
It sent something through her again, and the feelings were familiar but also hazy, and for a second she felt in limbo like you are when you're drunk. When you know things just happened, when you can remember them but not really, and you feel like your body and reality betray you together.
10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2009 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow.
just.
wow (:
Date: April 03, 2009 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just perfect. I loved the rain, I loved Pam's uncertainty, I loved the "okay"'s at the end. I loved it all.
Date: April 03, 2009 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
*buys yanana a bottle of Makers Mark*
Keep writing.