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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2009 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sad story, but very good. I like how its very simple. Its emotional in its simplicity. And you tackle different characters, different veiwpoints. Very good job!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2009 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG. This was so very sad. And so beautifully written. Wonderful job.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh. That was so sad. I teared up! Now go write a happy story! :)

That was great. Gut-wrenching...but great.

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2009 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

this is fantastic, keep going with it

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2009 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

...wow.

amazing (:

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