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Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2006 03:01 am Title: Chapter 17

Wow, is right.  And of course Jim has lots of control...didn't we see it all the first two seasons in how he didn't kiss the hell out of Pam in Episode One?

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2006 02:52 am Title: Chapter 16

Wow, I love Feisty!Pam.  She's totally right, too.

Reviewer: GreenEyes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2006 12:05 am Title: Chapter 8

“And this silence fell – this deafening silence – while I was standing there trying to get up the nerve to just…fucking say it, tell her I was in love with her.  Or kiss her.  Just something, anything, and I just….”

You. Have. Got. To. Be. Kidding. Me.

You're insanely talented. I'm sorry I can't offer anything more valuable than that, but I really have to go and read the rest of these. Like, now.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

That was amazing.  Sweet and hot.  HOT.  Really wonderful work. 

Reviewer: Muppet Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 17

So very, very good. I'm so glad Pam got some gumption - it's very true that Pam was put in a nightmare situation on Casino night, no matter how much she loved Jim. Now, if only we would see some of this love on the show...

 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

Too funny that Michael watches "Pimp My Ride" so he can connect with the employees from "the hood". And it was so much fun to read about Kelly helping Pam with her make-up and her dress - and that Kelly thinks she's doing it for Roy.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 17

Well, you certainly delivered on your promise. And I think you just upped yourself to an 'M' (not that that's a bad thing.)  Loved how playful they were, even in the moment. Also love how Pam steps up to the plate. And Jim has such...expertise. Just scrumptious.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 17

AHHHH!  Great ending!!!  Oh my, I totally felt this, and I don't just think it's the wine speaking, hehe.  I read your earlier chapters this afternoon, and when Karen found out it was Pam, I literally (I kid you not) screamed really loud.  I just died at that.  I could totally see that happening.

And -- Pam -- kissing Jonathan?  WOW.

And Pam's black dress?  And the matching black panties and bra?  Hot.

I really enjoyed this one.  I really, really want them back together now.  I will read this for encouragement when I am getting depressed over the next few episodes -- I will KNOW that Jim and Pam are meant to be together.  I will know.   

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

I literally clapped! f-a-n-t-a-s-t-i-c.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 17

Damn girl, you write some good smut.  Rock on, sister.

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 17

Wow.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

What???  What does she have to do first?   And I am monitering the boards, so get to it, Missy!

<> Seriously though, this is most enjoyable :) 

Reviewer: beruco Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 16

Aghh! Do your fingers hurt? I hope not. What about your keyboard? Oh, to hell with it.

I. Need. A. Resolution. Please?

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh.My.God.

Hurry up! I am dying over here! sigh. I wish this would REALLY happen on the show!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 16

Okay, so I go away for a couple of hours and you've completed like 30 more chapters, one more riveting than the next...while I'm still trying to get one more up. You are a force of nature, woman.

'Maybe you're not hearing me, so I'll say it again.' Yes. Love me some angry Pam. Wish she'd have that gumption on the show. And is there a sexier thing than angry Jim? I think not. I soooo want to see how you wrap this up. And, as you know, patience is not my strong suit!

Reviewer: beruco Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 15

How sweet that I misspelled you're..
Maybe I should take a break from the editing.

Reviewer: beruco Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

So I've never actually commented on one of your stories. That's a shame. I should tell you how much I really enjoy Jonathan. And, now I have.

Also, I'm stuck in a newspaper office by myself on deadline this weekend, so between editing stories and laying them in I'm allowing myself to read one of your updates. I love this marathon your on today. It's working great with my little reward system of sorts. Keep up the good work, sister.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh, poor wounded Jim. 

And this killed me: she stood on her toes, pressing her lips against his suddenly, prompting him to stumble backward a few steps.  

It wasn’t the same.  She knew it wouldn’t be. 

Reviewer: val Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 15

oh my god!! I love this story and I love how you've been updating so quickly today.  I'm dying to find out what happens next

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

I'm on the edge of my seat!  I know I sound like a broken record, but this just gets better and better. 

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yay!  Pam's finally taking her first steps!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 13

Jon and Pam are so sweet together, even platonically.  I love the old lady, and Roy's jealousy.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

How much do I love Kelly giving Pam makeup tips and taking her shopping?  A lot, that's how much.  Seriously, that's adorable.

Reviewer: meg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 14

Oh my gosh I love it.  Keep writing - you're killing me here! :)

Reviewer: Supervixen Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 14

I love seeing the other side of Michael. *sigh* I'm waiting for Pam's confession!

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