Date: February 13, 2024 04:28 am Title: Cafe Beignet
It is always nice to see Pam finally recognize how much Jim loves her, and how much she cherishes and returns that love. I enjoyed seeing this from the camera crew's perspective. Just one thing: you slipped into the present tense earlier on, when the rest of the story is in the past tense. Otherwise, nice job!
Date: February 07, 2010 02:15 pm Title: Cafe Beignet
I love the idea that Pam and the producer are friends. But I'm even more glad that Jim and Pam went on that date.
Date: May 09, 2009 10:05 pm Title: Cafe Beignet
This was lovely. Congrats on your first fic here - I hope we see more from you soon!
Date: April 21, 2009 04:39 pm Title: Cafe Beignet
I think this is a really neat look on things. I think it's very believable and I like that it could have happened like this. Very great job for your first time posting!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate that.
Date: April 20, 2009 08:21 pm Title: Cafe Beignet
Great job! I really enjoyed reading this :)
Author's Response: Thanks! This was my very first attempt at FanFic, so I was a little nervous posting it. I appreciate the comment.