10 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2009 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
There comes a moment in your life where you realize that everything you ever wanted was everything that you couldn't have. But the scary part about it was that was completely your choice. You made a decision. You said no. You watched him walk away, you didn't stop him. And that was your own fault.
This made me ache. Angst to the max, yet amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Pam! And that little paragraph was one of my favorites to write - I actually wrote it, then checked the number or words, and was spot on the 55. It made me a little giddy haha
8 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2009 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was very well done. I enjoy your angst as much as your fluffalicious-ness! S3 angst is so much easier to read now that we're on the road to happily ever after....
Author's Response: I absolutely agree Kay - I can only deal with a lot of angst knowing there's a fluffy future ahead lol - thanks for the review!! :)
Date: April 22, 2009 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay for angst! and good angst at that :)
Author's Response: Thanks Katie! I appreciate the review! :)
Date: April 22, 2009 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was pretty good. I think I would have enjoyed it more if my mom wasn't watching youtube two feet away (that kind of was distracting), but still good. I always like 55 word stories, and just taking it in teeny little chunks as part of a journy is cool.
Angst is always good to remind you how great the fluffy time is.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm excited that your mom knows what YouTube is - my own mother? She can barely check her e-mail lol. Thanks for the review :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2009 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
lovely.
so very lovely (:
Author's Response: Thanks for the review MixedBreed!! :)
Date: April 22, 2009 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Arghhh, angst! I love it, though, especially season 3 angst. You wrote these really well--I'm so jealous of people that can do 55 word pieces, because I always need at least, like, two thousand words. Really great, keep up this burst of creativity, I'm loving it!
Author's Response: Oh but Big Tuna, how I love your at least 2,000 words lol... I feel maxed out when I reach 1,000 haharnrnThanks so much for the review!!
Date: April 22, 2009 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay for you and your creativity! Love me some fluff, but angst is a nice change of pace. Great job in managing to convey so much in so few words.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! That means a lot to me :)