10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2009 11:27 am Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
OMG! How did I miss this??? This is a great start! I'm off to read chapter 2 right now! Oh, don't mind the puddle of Jim Goo i left behind, I'm sure it'll follow me eventually.
Author's Response: OMG coming from you this review makes me so happy. Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Jim as a Daddy is HOT, right?
Date: May 27, 2009 03:41 pm Title: You Complete Me.
I am really enjoying this story! There is definitely a lot of places you can go with it. I also like that Jim and Pam are both single.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: YAY glad you're enjoying where this is going so far, hopefully you'll like what else I have planned =) Thanks for taking the time to review :)
Date: May 27, 2009 01:52 pm Title: You Complete Me.
I just love this story. Little Ellie really tugs at my heartstrings. I can't wait until Pam meets her. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot. I really hope you like what I have planned for Jim, Ellie and Pam :)
Date: May 26, 2009 09:01 pm Title: You Complete Me.
I am really enjoying this story! You have me thinking of all kinds of scenarios where Pam can find out about Ellie. Will Pam learn to sign? (THAT would be good for some bonus points with the doting dad!)
My favorite parts are the ones that you write of Jim and his daughter. Very sweet.
Can't wait for thenext installment...
Author's Response: YAY I'm so glad you're enjoying this. I'm definitely thinking Pam will try and learn to sign, how cute would that be?rnrnThanks for reviewing, it means A LOT!!
Date: May 26, 2009 08:22 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
This is a very interesting idea you're running with. I'm looking forward to seeing how it will progress. Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly =)
Date: May 26, 2009 04:03 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
I don't know why I didn't read this when the first chapter posted, but I'm so glad that I read it when you posted Ch. 2. It's a lovely story so far, I'm looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It means a lot!!!
Date: May 26, 2009 03:41 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
I am really liking this! Great job! Hope it's updated soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Working on part three now :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2009 02:51 pm Title: You Complete Me.
I love this! Jim is such a great dad - just like I pictured he would be. I can't wait to see the developments between him and Pam and what happens with Ellie!
Update soon! :D
Author's Response: YAY so happy you're enjoying this =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2009 12:21 pm Title: You Complete Me.
Definately still with you! This is such a sweet story and I can't wait to see where it goes :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know some people hate it when people are all "please review and let me know you're still here," but it really does help to know people are still interested and enjoying this story, so thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot =)
Date: May 26, 2009 12:09 pm Title: You Complete Me.
it's good. I actually started writing a story where Jim was a single father last night, i don't know how I hadn't come across this story. You should throw it in the 'Daddy Jim' section.
Anyway, you're story is really, really good. You're description's are really good, but I'm wondering is Ellie entirely deaf or can she hear when she has her hearing aids in?
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much. I want to put this in the Daddy Jim section, but am not sure how just yet - any help would be much appreciated :)rnrnOhhhh I can't wait to read your storrrry, get busy :)rnrnOkay,so I'll go in to detail more about Ellie's hearing later in the story, but she can hear with her aids in, but not normally like someone with perfect hearing. For example she's hear her Daddy talking to her with her aids in, but she might not catch everything he's saying, and she'd not hear him how we hear him, you know? Hope that helped. Jim will explain it more lol.rnrnThanks again for reviewing, it means a lot!!!
Date: May 26, 2009 08:16 am Title: You Complete Me.
I am so glad to see this one again. I really like the premise and hope you keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much. Already working on chapter three :)
Date: May 26, 2009 08:07 am Title: You Complete Me.
Awesome ending! :)
Author's Response: Hehe thankkkkks :)
Date: May 26, 2009 08:02 am Title: You Complete Me.
I'm loving this story. It's unique and heartbreaking and I can't wait to see what you have in store for Jim and Pam. And I already hate that Chloe chick...I sure hope you can update soon! Hope you had fun on vacation :)
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much. No no, Roy wont be entering in to this story... or will he... lol, no kidding!! He wont, so we're all safe =)rnrnI'm SO glad you like this though, and thanks for reviewing, it means a lot!!!
Date: May 26, 2009 06:08 am Title: You Complete Me.
Really enjoying this, "Hannah" ; ) He loved moments like that, when she was so sleepy and heavy in his arms, but her eyes still snapped open to make sure he was still there. What a sweet moment you've described. I can just picture it. More soon, ok?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still with me and that you're enjoying this. I have so much planned for this story and I want to make sure I do it justice, you know?rnThanks so much for reading AND reviewing. It's reasuring to know you've not lost people on the way lol.rnrn
Date: May 06, 2009 01:00 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
I love this! I'm really looking forward to talking about where you're going to go and what's going to happen and ahhhh I'm so excited for this story! This is gonna be great; did I already say that I'm super excited about this?
Date: May 05, 2009 07:31 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
You have no idea how big I smiled when I read that Jim was putting in Ellie's hearing aids. I'm deaf myself, so the idea of signing Jim just makes me :D Really looking forward to more of this. If you have any questions about deafness in children or you know, being deaf, I don't mind answering them :)
Author's Response: Awww YAY I'm so glad you liked this story. Like I said, I felt inspired to write this after my friend found out about her little boy. I'd love to talk to you and ask you some questions. I live in the UK, so I don't know how different stuff is compared to the US =) If you have AIM my name is SnoWhiteSally feel free to ping me =)
9 [Report This]Date: May 05, 2009 06:54 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
The relationship between Jim and Ellie is beautiful and a little heartbreaking, what with her ailment and all. I'm so sorry about your friend and her son.
Anyway, this is wonderfully written, I'm so excited at the prospect of some slightly-AU JAM moments :) PLEASE keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much I hope you'll all like what I have planned =)
Date: May 05, 2009 07:36 am Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
Nice start, Hannah_Halpert! Interesting premise.
Author's Response: Heeee thanks, coming from you (you're like the official MTT fic critic) that means a lot =)
Date: May 04, 2009 09:51 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
Wow! This was a great chapter! I am excited to see where this story is going. Cannot wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you SO much, that means a lot!!!! I'm starting the next chapter now =)
Date: May 04, 2009 09:23 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
What an interesting premise for a story! I am looking forward to seeing what you do with this.
Author's Response: Coming from you that is awesome, thank you!
Date: May 04, 2009 08:55 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
i'm super excited to see where you go with this :) it looks like fun!
Author's Response: Thank yoooou :)
Date: May 04, 2009 08:38 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
This is awesome!! Firstly, I have a thing for dads, and so SingleDadJim is certainly hot stuff in my book. And Baby Ellie is deaf, so Jim signs to her... I am melting... you have my undivided attention Hannah!
I CANNOT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!
Author's Response: I know right, Jim as a dad is HOT... Jim as a single dad and being all hands on is HOTTER, and Ellie is totally cute (obviously, she's made from Jim lol)rnrnSo happy you liked it. I can't wait to get the story started and for Ellie to meet everyone =)rnrnThanks again xx
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2009 08:32 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
Wow I love this so far. Please continue
Author's Response: Thank you. I can't tell you how much I appreciate that, it's so hard when you're a nervous little writer, so these kind reviews honestly do help, so yay thanks =)rnrnStay tuned, I have lots in store for Jim and Elie :)
Date: May 04, 2009 08:20 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
You're off to a great start! Really interesting story idea. I'm looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank yoooou. I was so nervous about posting this, so I'm glad you guys like it. As I said in my notes, I was sort of inspired to write this story after my friend found out her little boy was deaf, so I've done all my research and have seen everything Jim's done with Ellie first hand, so I hope that comes across =)
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2009 08:17 pm Title: You're three thousand miles from the place you once called home
this was adorable... Jim and his little girl always make me melt and being that he is signing to her is ten times more adorable :)
I hope you keep this story going, Id love to see where its heading!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like the story, I was nervous about how it would be recieved!! I have lots planned for Jim and Ellie, so stay tuned :)