10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1 What are they missing?
Much better ending then the show is gonna give us.
Author's Response:
I really hope that the show pulls through. I'll just cry if they decide not to put Jim and Pam together
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1 What are they missing?
Sorry, I forgot to also tell you that as I was reading this I had the radio on and snow patrol came on. It was magical. It's like a sign to me. Do you have any more stories because I would love to read them.
Author's Response:
That's is totally amazing!!! I'm working on another JAM story, but if you have any other shows/books/movies that you would like me to write a story for, I'll give you my e-mail and write a story for you! I would even write one for you and that guy. Here is my e-mail feel free to use it: just2hearyoubreathing@yahoo.com
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1 What are they missing?
This is so heart touching to me... I cried. I love the whole Jam on tv thing but you just helped me to make the connection in my life. I was best friends with this guy that was so in love with me but i didn;t realize that i loved him untill it was too late. I especially love this part: "when I realized that I didn’t just think of you as my best friend. I discovered that you were so much more to me than that. You gave me feelings, and hopes, and dreams that no one else ever could." Thank you so much for this story... i gotta get that guy back ... i love the way you beautifully write. Thank you.
Author's Response: Awww! Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I'm sure you will get the guy back. As Michael said "Never, ever, give up". Everything will work out in the end, if it hasn't worked out, it's not the end. Good luck! <333
6 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 What are they missing?
I like the "ending with the song" idea, but I feel like I've seen this particular scenario (with 'Chasing Cars' at the end) a milion times. Maybe try to intersperse the lyrics thoughout the fic, so that it's not all at the end...good work, though..
Author's Response: Yeah, it's just that a lot of people can't stand the lyrics throughout the story. I just figured this way, everyone get's what they want. lol. You have an excellent point though, it is a most cliche thing. Thanks for your feedback.