Date: January 09, 2010 07:13 am Title: numbness
Is it possible to say I love something that I hate. I mean, I hate that Jim was ever this sad and broken and hurt... but you portrayed it very well, so I love that aspect of it. But still, poor Jim. Very well written!
Date: June 21, 2009 01:25 pm Title: numbness
The first paragraph. Amazing.
He's found that there's this time, this very specific moment just at daybreak, that looks so much like dusk that he can barely stand it.
Masochism doesn't have a place in a life that already has so many opportunities for pain.
Ouch. This makes me ache in more ways that I thought possible.
Job well done. :)
On another note, you've made me curious about the poster you have. :) Which picture of him is it?
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2009 09:25 am Title: numbness
i really love this line: He hates himself for being so foolish, so young, so sure beyond everything that because he loved her it would work. it's so tragically accurate in it's honesty.
it's so good because you've made his desperate and his anguish and his despair actually palpable and tangible, and it is just suffocatingly hard but it's so well written. love the characterisation, because this is the jim that we all know existed, but the cameras never let us see.
awesome
Author's Response: This review makes me squee a bit because that is almost word for word what I told myself I wanted it to be. YAY. I can now die happy. Tyvm x five!
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2009 07:22 am Title: numbness
Okay, the first paragraph was incredible. I haven't even read any further yet. I just wanted to say that.
This was excellent. I love getting a peek inside of Jim's head, and you did it wonderfully. Thank you!
Author's Response: Aha I love it when I have to stop reading to say something in the review so I don't forget, so I'm very happy I accomplished that (: And thank YOU for reading!
Date: June 04, 2009 11:02 am Title: numbness
this line :He's found that there's this time, this very specific moment just at daybreak, that looks so much like dusk that he can barely stand it.
sooo beautiful. I put it on my facebook page. i had tears, really. you are amazing. love it!
luchy
Author's Response: Wow, thank you (:
Date: June 01, 2009 12:31 pm Title: numbness
you had me at "general season 3 angst." it's awesome. very good to read something that is not "Jim, Pam and baby ride off into the sunset and live happily ever after." I needed this today :)
Author's Response: Aha ikr? I live off angst and the only angst around at the moment is baby angst, if that. Past angst FTW!
rnOh, and thanks. (:
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2009 06:52 am Title: numbness
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Yay thank you! ^__^