10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 04:19 am Title: Hi Ho, etc.
heheh. go find your inner dwarf.
Date: May 24, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Team Building
Perfect. So perfect.
Date: May 24, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Team Building
Perfect. So perfect.
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the kind words
Date: May 23, 2007 09:54 am Title: Hi Ho, etc.
Aww! Clown day is just priceless. And Karen and Toby dressed alike. Nice.
Author's Response: Couldn't you just see Dwight dressed as a sad clown in camo? With Karen and Toby I might be putting a square peg in a round hole, but both characters need somebody to make them see the good parts of life. Just a thought. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: May 21, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
I really like that Jim comes to an art show and gets it!
Author's Response: Sappy I know, but I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reviewing
Date: May 21, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
How nice! The line about breathing like a frog is really funny. I like the Toby/Karen dynamic, and Pam's line about letting her know when he doesn't feel like an ass. Also, how only Jim has no trouble sleeping!
Date: May 21, 2007 08:39 am Title: Team Building
Ryan ducked behind a tree. Kelly looked in the direction of the shot and saw Dwight. "You shot me in the boob you jerk!"
Too funny, and I can totally imagine Kelly saying that. Cute story!
Author's Response:
Something similar actually happened to one of my friends while she was in a paintball game. I thought is suited Ryan and Kelly. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: May 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
Ok, I REALLY love this. The characterizations are great, and the story is moving along nicely. So, in short - yay! great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words!
Date: May 20, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
"She wondered if Kelly could breathe through her skin like a frog." - I think you may have stumbled upon the explanation! So simple, yet so brilliant!
Author's Response: Not only can she breathe through her skin, she also has jumping ability to put Kobe Bryant to shame.
8 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
Yay, sequel! So next we'll get clowns? Can't wait.
The hypnosis thing felt like a stretch, plot-wise--apparently I'm a skeptic about hypnosis, who knew?--but I loved where you went with it (the one thing he couldn't remember was "happy").
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was something of a stretch. But for some reason the seven dwarves got stuck in my head, and I couldn't think of happy to save myself. I thought it might be a good device to use in a Jim/Karen to Jim/Pam story and this was the best I could do
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 01:44 pm Title: Team Building
This was so funny. I could picture it in my head just like an extra episode. Voices--spot on. Things I loved... Angela shooting Kevin (three times!), Jim and Pam's understated moment while putt-putt golfing (and then they both prayed it was a "Pepsi-only place," heh), Jim not shooting Pam, Andy losing it (of course), Michael chatting up the referee. The ref's talking head was my favorite of many funny talking heads: "Yeah, I think I'm quitting after today. I'd like to work with a higher class of people... Maybe I'll be a stripper." Loved it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. I liked writing the coed character. Maybe I should have added more between her and Michael.
Date: May 20, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Hi Ho, etc.
Fun!!! Kelly the five-year-old is especially nice.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Kelly's voice is hard for me, so I'm glad you liked her.
Date: May 19, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Team Building
"I guess I win," Creed said.
Too funny.
Author's Response: Creed is a lot of fun to write because you can make him say almost anything. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: May 19, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Team Building
Creed: Which one is Ryan?
Hilarious. Karen and Toby.... interesting! Dwight and Andy were hysterical.
I loved this. Wish there was more!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I only just noticed that there was a way to respond to reviews. I know, not really very observant. I think Karen and Toby could compliment each other. Course I could be wrong.