Date: September 20, 2009 05:38 am Title: I'm Just Sorry
So great. I really like Pam's "I don't know how to feel." A perfect explanation of that moment!
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10 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2009 12:01 pm Title: I'm Just Sorry
ahhhhhhhh (:
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Date: July 20, 2009 05:00 am Title: I'm Just Sorry
I really liked this:
"I don't know how to feel," she whispers to the sun...
Very nice.
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10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 11:53 pm Title: I'm Just Sorry
Lovely.
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10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 09:50 pm Title: I'm Just Sorry
I loved this: And that morning, under the sun and clouds, between the grass and the treetops, and with the tender touch of their lips, Jim and Pam were irrevocable.
Gorgeous!
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8 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 09:27 pm Title: I'm Just Sorry
"Everything he has ever dreamed of is in his arms and the urge to never let go blooms within their restless lips, fingers, and hearts."
I think this is my favorite of yours so far. Such a beautiful ending.
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