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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2023 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

I find this perfectly realistic. Jim had these struggles while Pam was in New York and coming even further out of her shell.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2010 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can see how he'd worry, honestly. When you feel the world for someone, there's always a prickle in the back of your mind. The line "She could do so much" takes on so many meanings.

Author's Response: Yeah, its definitely something that would across Jim's mind because he finally has Pam and she is one thing he has really, truly been passionate about[that we've seen on the show]. I'm glad you picked up on the multiple meanings. Thanks for the review, Andastainonmyshirt.

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh this was incredible!!
More please!!

Author's Response: Thats it for this one. I dont really know where to go from here. Sorry, Dwangie.rnThanks for the review and the ego boost! ;)

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Argh. As secure as they seem to be, I can't help but believe this has crossed Jim's mind in a low moment. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, they're definitely not perfect. I like to think Jim must have his more vulnerable moments when he knows Pam wont find out.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2009 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I pray that it never happens. My heart broke reading that last line!


Author's Response: Sorry for breaking your heart. I hope it never happens either, I would lose all faith in love. :(rnThanks for your review!

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