10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2010 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my...this is lovely. Thanks to Story of the Moment, I discovered this and it's such a wonderful AU look at what could have happened. This was very sweet and heartfelt.
That last line slayed me. She got him back!! *happy sigh*
Thanks for sharing!
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was heartbreakingly good. Poor Pam. I say poor Pam, and I mean it, yet the adult in me realizes that if Pam had only told Jim, this never would have happened. And I don't mean just your story....I meant the S3 angst in general.
Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comment, and I totally agree with you. Pam should have told him off the bat. It's as easy as that.
Date: September 08, 2009 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I would have liked this so much better. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I would have liked it better too!
Date: September 07, 2009 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
sounds good, school starts wednesday for me, ah! i'll be a freshman, good look to you, dwangie!
Date: September 07, 2009 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
no problem, and thanks for explaining it. i don't think the story is confusing to most people, because the piece is pretty straight forward, it's just the conclusion, like you said is very open, so i was trying to figure out what you as the author wanted people to take from it. (sorry, very long sentence)
so, yeah, great job, and i'm glad we're both thinking the same thing now. can't wait for whatever you come up with next!
Author's Response: well, i'm glad you understand it now! and thanks for the comments, i really appreciate them! and hopefully i'll write something very soon - school starts for me tomorrow so i'm going to be busy, but i will always make time for some jim and pam! :) thanks again!
Date: September 07, 2009 06:06 am Title: Chapter 1
yay for angst! I enjoyed it :) good job.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2009 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww, poor pam. i loved the perspective you wrote this in, dwangie, very realistic for the setting and timeframe. i'm not really sure if i understand the ending, but let me try to say what i thought, and let me know if i'm wrong:
pam goes to see jim in connecticut, maybe to get some closure, also to see him, explain about roy, and just try to get him back in general. jim seems ready to forgive her, and all would have gone well (i think) if karen hadn't been there. i think if karen hadn't shown she was there, than it would've been, easier for pam and she wouldn't have felt like she was intruding in jim's new life, and it would've ended differently. preferably pam staying in connecticut for the weekend to catch up. but it didn't.
is that right, i'm sorry to sort of counter-argue with what you wrote, i did like it, i'm just trying to understand your plot.
sorry for rambling, dwangie, great job!
Author's Response: that's exactly right! he kisses her, and maybe a few more words are exchanged, but she goes home again, back to scranton, and that's how it ends, her making that list in her home. hopefully though, which we do not know, jim will end his relationship with karen and come home to pam. but i obviously didnt write that and i'm not going to - i want to leave it open, so it could end any way.
but yes, you got it right, sorry for the confusion! i'm glad you enjoyed it, though, and i really, really appreciate your feedback!! thank you!