Reviews For For Better or For Worse
Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2009 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day
Date: September 25, 2009 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day
Definitely keep going! I want to see what happends. Good job so far!
Author's Response: Thanks Dedeen, I really appreciate the feedback. The first person has been an interesting trial for me so I'm glad to hear it's readable.
Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2009 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day
Author's Response: Thanks for coming along, lisahoo. DM seems to be circling the drain, and I was intrigued by the question of how Provider!Jim would conflict with Easygoing!Jim if times got really rough, and how that would affect his relationship with Pam - which is what the next chapter will hopefully explore.
Date: September 25, 2009 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 Here's That Rainy Day
It's rough going out there -- I'm surprised DM is still in business, too.
Provider!Jim is compelling, though, I'll come along to see where he takes us....
Author's Response: Thanks for coming along, lisahoo. DM seems to be circling the drain, and I was intrigued by the question of how Provider!Jim would conflict with Easygoing!Jim if times got really rough, and how that would affect his relationship with Pam - which is what the next chapter will hopefully explore.