1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 06:32 am Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
I would request a continuation. In fact, I thought there was one but it is blank and now I am sad.
Date: October 03, 2016 06:44 am Title: "tell me you love me, come back and haunt me..."
Aw.. so sad! Is this a glitch or did the author delete this? I loved the first chapter... would really liked to be able to read the second.
Date: January 30, 2010 09:18 pm Title: "tell me you love me, come back and haunt me..."
I read this chapter before, but now it's gone. I enjoyed it and hope it returns.
Date: January 29, 2010 12:17 am Title: "tell me you love me, come back and haunt me..."
i cant see the storie...something is wrong with it!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2010 06:41 pm Title: "tell me you love me, come back and haunt me..."
Keep going, this was really good and well written! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Btw, I love that Coldplay song! 'A Rush of Blood to the Head' is the only album I own besides the single 'Viva la Vida' - they're both so good!
Alright, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2009 08:03 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
Please add more!
Date: October 16, 2009 10:19 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
More please!!
Date: October 15, 2009 09:45 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
Count me in as another who would love to see this continued! (please)
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 09:58 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
please continue! i love stories of pam leaving roy, they're all similar yet so different in their own way. this is really good, and i cal tell it would be a very interesting story, please continue, i am so curious as to how you would proceed. (imagine casino night and jim telling pam how he's in love with her, then her rejecting. that's how much i'm pleading, and how serious and emotional i'd be if you don't. friendly request!)
Date: October 14, 2009 04:20 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
i think it would be awesome to see what happens next, but i'm just a sucker for any jim and pam interaction i can get =]
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2009 10:18 am Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
Nice work, Pam's inner dialouge was just beautiful. Even though we know it didn't end like this, I'd like to think that breakup happened just like that. Not with Roy the bad one or Pam the good one,just a realization that they wern't right for each other. I would love to see this continue.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's one of the reasons I wrote it- I feel like everyone makes Roy the bad guy, and don't get me wrong, I think he's a jerk most of the time. But I feel that somewhere along the line they both must have realized that it wasn't working, and I think they loved each other once, which is what I wanted to convey with their breakup. That they weren't the same people they used to be, not just that Roy was uncaring.
Date: October 13, 2009 11:29 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
Oh yes, more please... very good.
Date: October 13, 2009 10:32 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
Ooh, please write another chapter! This was very good and I'd like to see what happens at Jim's apartment.
I agree with kaystar about the flashbacks, but other than that, I loved this.
6 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2009 08:29 pm Title: I've been swimming upstream for you...
I enjoyed this and would be happy to read about Pam's visit to Jim.
I got confused when you inserted flashbacks in the middle of the story without them appearing as flashbacks. I'm probably not being very clear but it might read better if Pam's flashback were in italics or somehow different than the normal text. Just a suggestion.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I actually originally had the flashbacks in italics, but for some reason it didn't transfer over when I submitted the story, and I can't figure out how to fix it. Sorry for the confusion! :)