1 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2019 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ouch my heart! This is very nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wrote this so long ago that I don't remember what it's about so I'm gonna read it now. haha
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2011 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really terrific! I love the premise (he gave her the card, Pam couldn't part with it, Roy found it, he hit her!), and the writing was great. Thanks for writing.
10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 08:47 am Title: Chapter 2
This was just perfect. I can totally see all of this happening in the show. I have only recently discovered this website but this has to be my favorite story so far. You are an amazing writer!! Thanks for posting this.
Also even though the ending was great…I wish you could continue with this. (hint, hint) :)
Date: October 29, 2007 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
don't know why but i like the roy hitting pam and jim to rescue stories...and this one is a great one..very sweet:)
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
You do not know how long I've wanted someone to have a storyline involving Roy hitting Pam. I know; odd, but, it adds a new element for Jam. Really great; please continue!
Date: January 14, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow...this was just too freakin cute. Loved it.
Date: November 21, 2006 11:56 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm still nervous about how people interpret this story, so it's always good to know when people like it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Great conversation in this chapter. Very real
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I felt like the characters were in me as I wrote this chapter. It was a really interesting experience.
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
*glad i was up late to see this* wow, it is time to go to bed. i need to yell "quiet, you" at the loud people in my dorm.
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
well, i have to say i was up late to see this :) there was absolutely no jam tonight, so i really needed this. i'm so glad you are continuing the story!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. can't wait for chapter 2!
Author's Response: Thanks! I should have it up later tonight!
Date: October 12, 2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just wanted to clarify my review - I didn't recall your last version needing a re-write...am impressed because I think the desire to improve something that's already done is admirable. Complacency is the enemy of art (or something heavy-handed like that!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I remember reading this when you published it earlier. Am really impressed that you've gone back to do a re-write - I admire your instinct to revisit a piece you've already 'done' because you felt you had something more to bring to it now. Makes me want to stop being so lazy and do the same with some of my older stuff! Looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I realized this needed to change from past to present tense when I was writing the second chapter, and then as I was reading through it, I found some stuff to improve. Thanks for reading!