1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2025 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so ready for Pam to snap.
1 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2025 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is a perfect combination of quick pacing and a slowburn.
1 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2025 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
You couldn't have set it up better.
1 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2025 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn, this looks very promising.
Date: January 01, 2025 09:33 am Title: Chapter 7
This ending was perfect oh my god and i absolutely love the full circle moment 🫶
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2025 09:31 am Title: Chapter 6
1. The dirty talk uh yes more pls we need more possessive Jim actually and i will always be firm in that that is absolutely canon and in character for Jim: absolutely and sometimes scarily (in a good sexy how way!!) possessive in bed like it's literally one of his top kinks
2. This is like a casino night fix it omg once again youve mastered Dark!Jim and Lovable!Jim really well by that last few moments.
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2025 09:24 am Title: Chapter 5
You repurposed the infamous "I cant" SO. WELL. i squealed?? Thank god im in bed and alone?? That was amazing?? But now im like pls have a happy ending 😭
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2025 09:15 am Title: Chapter 4
You're building the tension really really well omg? Im literally wishing it could go on. You really nailed the back and forth on such a more passionate note with this premise I'm like wanting you to drag this out more, see Jim push Pam even more this is so great really
Date: January 01, 2025 09:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved this line:
"She'd left somewhere for lunch, but even his usual jealousy at whatever corner of the earth got to enjoy her presence without him could not quash his feelings of excitement."
You've mastered this in between of Datk!Jim and the hopelessly romantically in love Jim it's amazing
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2025 09:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Not dragging at all your pacing is great and HAHAHA IS IT HOT IN HERE
1 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2025 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Uhm yes hi *downs an entire 10L gallon of water* i am so here for dark jim
Date: December 20, 2020 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm all for tension build up! The chainsaw reference made me smile.
Who knew something as simple as moving Pam out of the way to get to the fridge could be so hot?
Date: December 20, 2020 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
Meredith shows remarkable restraint in her comment. Trust Meredith to say out loud what everyone else (I'm looking at you, Phyllis!) thinks.
Excellent use of supporting cast.
Date: December 20, 2020 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jim is a self aware guy. He also is a quick learner as he pays attention to detail. I like how you brought that out with "Women respond to him." and Katy's reaction to him.
Date: December 20, 2020 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim's slow reaction to the whiskey and its affect on him was so good. His acknowledgement of what he gives Pam without receiving had to gnaw at him at times.
While Jim is easygoing, he is, afterall, a guy. He isn't a single note but layered as all humans are. His Dark Jim isn't malevolent, but Dark Jim can be a tactic to be used to get what he wants.
1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2019 09:09 am Title: Chapter 7
Wonderfully done. Thanks for this.
Date: October 13, 2019 09:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Yay! What a glorious speech!
Date: October 13, 2019 09:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Awesomely hot! But I kept waiting for things to backfire on him...
Date: October 13, 2019 08:52 am Title: Chapter 4
The buildup in this is masterful. I can't wait either, Jim.
Date: October 13, 2019 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this! So original! And the salesman angle is perfect.
Date: October 13, 2019 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really excited to read this! I mean REALLY.
1 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2019 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this is your first smut? What? Whaaaaat?? So good. Jesus. So very, very good
PS: This is my first review on this site :) I'm new to the fandom
1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2018 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
I realize I’m 9 years too late on this fic, but I HAVE to leave a review! Wow!! I have to fan myself and clutch my pearls at our dear Jim! Yes, he may have been a little OOC, but it was still believable. Top marks all around!
1 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2018 06:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Guh. That was fantastic.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great transition from pretty much in universe AU of Jim acting earlier to total smut.