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Reviewer: Newtruefan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2010 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent! I loved his heart-felt monologue and her realization that a man who is willing to let his feelings show is a man worth meeting in the middle of the night. Great dialogue!

Reviewer: Newtruefan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2010 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow! Sniffle, that is some good mush there.

I really liked it! 10 stars!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2009 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this. So sweet and just... aww. Such a great phone call.

Except... I miss long days. Long boring days. I miss them. I know they don't, but I do. I really miss my long boring days. This working thing sucks sometimes.

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2009 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwwww...that was the sweetest Jim speech!! They are so cute and even though you may not of meant for it to be hot...I would kill to be Pam at that hotel!! :)

Great story!! :) 

Reviewer: classy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2009 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1

And this is my favorite one of yours. Maybe I'm just having an emotional day because I know this isn't supposed to be really really sappy or anything, but this made me tear up. First, it just sounds like such a natural conversation. Very well written that way. And second, that stream of consciousness rambling of Jim's would make my voice crack if I were Pam, too. There's something kind of romantic about having to be apart. You say the way you feel about the other person that you may not say in person in regular, day to day life. Used to be letter writing back in the day, but this phone call is sweet and reminds me of that.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 16, 2009 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Amorous, this is simply beautiful--and sexy.  I could just feel the emotion and the longing.  And now I see that I should have read it second, after your other story, but I loved it even without having read that one first.  Sorry for the rambling!  Great job.  Psyched to read your other story :)

Reviewer: emhunter24 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2009 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing your stories here.

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