9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2010 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this a lot. You conveyed what Pam must have felt while being away from Jim at Pratt very well. And I love how just hearing his voice, talking to him made her feel better. The Hotel Halpert was a cute touch.
Date: November 16, 2009 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really got into Pam's head thanks to your well written description and insight. So vulnerable, so small. And Jim seems to just....know...and get that...and give her what she needs without directly acknowledging it. Which is what I love about these two. Thanks for this tender little passage.
9 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2009 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Amorous, I'm glad you shared this. You did a lovely job. You conveyed such a sense of loneliness--Pam alone in the city, not too far from Jim, but not nearly close enough. Both pieces that you posted have the perfect feel for what I would imagine that period in their relationship felt like. I hope you have more up your sleeve!