Date: June 28, 2023 02:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Very entertaining. Be careful with switching into the present tense if the story is written in the past. Easy to picture Pam from episode 2x06 here.
10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2006 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
wonderful story
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I actually read this fic this morning, but didn't want to login at work to review...
Your use of the umbrella as a confined space was truly original!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's so nice to read such wonderful compliments.
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2006 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I really enjoyed this story. This was such a creative way to put them in a confined situation even in an open space. Loved it.
(By the way, just as a heads up, the quote you have at the beginning of your story is from The Fight, not from The Injury. :))
Author's Response: Ack! I fixed that...thanks!
Date: July 13, 2006 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done -- the umbrella was a very creative response!
Author's Response: Thanks. I was listening to a song on the radio about the rain, and the umbrella just popped into my head.
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2006 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo, that was really good. And a creative response to Confined Spaces challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you! And, coming from you, that really means a lot. I love your stories!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story. And the ending worked out very nicely ;)
I hope we'll see more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks, Pixel (or should I say, contributor!) Your suggestion really gave it a good ending.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
An umbrella? Sheer brillance. Sad but utterly perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you! It did make me sad to write the ending, but I was doing a prequel, so I couldn't have a happy JAM ending.