8 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2010 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW! What an awesome idea! I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. Really well written and the description is just great (one small teensy bit - Pam's mom's name is Helene.) I don't think I've read another fic like this, where it's all a dream, so good work with such an original idea!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it's something new and different. (And I'll fix her name! Thanks for pointing that out!)
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2010 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start...I can't wait to see where you go with this!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try and update soon.
9 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2010 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm so surprised you don't have any reviews yet! This was really good! I love all the descriptive and dialogue - they both seemed very realistic - which I'm always delighted to see done well. I also really liked that you didn't go with the more simplistic approach and I seriously didn't think Pam was with Roy until he came into the room and was her fiance again. Great job and keep going! Let's have a confession to Jim and then break up with Roy! - well in my fantasies... I can't wait to see how you continue this!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad it all seemed realistic -- I really hoped it would :)
Date: February 04, 2010 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
just let her end up with jim.
:)
Author's Response: How could I not? ;)