1 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2018 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful and perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2010 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is amazing how much work can go into so few words. But it's also incredible how much emotion and vision can be packed into these same words. And that's what you've accomplished here. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to hear the emotion came across for you :)
Date: April 23, 2010 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely done. He does sort of drift off there in that scene and this could well be what's going through his head.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I think it's definitely implied that he's thinking about Pam in that scene, and in my mind at least, this is what he sees :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2010 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1
It's not often that a 55 word challenge can give me chills, but that's exactly what you just did. Though now that I read your end note, I liked the idea of Jim's dreams coming true in a longer piece of fluff, but this definitely delivered.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! - very pleased to hear this worked for you. :) I may still try to incorporate a similar idea into a longer piece - Unfortunately, I wasn't confident I could make the idea substantial enough for such an endeavor!