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Not the end notes being the cliffhanger 😭😭😭 oh gosh this really sucked me in no pressure to update though but damn the premise is really really good and so far im excited for more messiness.
The moment with the parents was so tender 🥺🥺🥺

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Okay i really didnt like Jill before and am pretty sure she was trying to come onto Jim too 👀 oof the dramaa but it was so cute these two moving for each other UGH i just want their happy ending. Also it's totally Jeremy right?

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:(((((

Loved this:
"“Your production doesn’t pay for the use of office supplies.” Dwight pulled a drawer open and dropped the tape in with little regard to it.

“Ryan?” Ryan wordlessly offered his tape over to Jim. “Send me the bill,” Jim told Dwight with a grin as he tore two pieces of tape off."

For the record pls never apologize for long chapters OMG THIS WAS SO PRECIOUS 😭

i love the pacing i can feel that time crunch just as much as them im really loving how youve written them still very in character but also so intriguingly new this was great

The tension is so good 😭😭 also the high five was fricken cute even if it would be very bad if they found out 😭

That was so hot the tension omg

Omg Jim why 😭😭 this is great ahahah

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I am so so excited for this premise omg

Came back to the group and found this fic, know it’s old but I still love it. Bummed it never finished.

Hey there... Me again. I cannot tell you just how much I want you to come back, continue and complete this. I've talked to Sally several times and she always says you're planning to come back, I pray that hasn't changed because I am absolutely desperate to see how this works out. I mean, like all of your AUs this is intriquing, compelling and just plain awesome. I want so much to find out the answers to the questions crowding my brain when you stopped working on this. Things like, who is it that knows and has been covering for them? Jill Daniels had been getting increasingly pushy and persistant with Jim, what's going to happen there? Are they going to become completely exposed as having shattered the 4th wall or will only one or two or a small handful of people know? Then the bigger, more life changing questions... What exactly did Pam's parent's think of Jim having just met them and been faced with the knowledge that Jim and Pam's plans are for her to move all the way across the country to the west coast when this all wraps. Assuming and hoping that we meet Jim's parents and family, what will they think of small town girl Pam? Will Jim and Pam actually make that big move because I seriously suspect they won't I think Pam just isn't a west coast gal and no matter what, Jim seems to feel so at home in Scranton. I suspect they will for whatever reason, maybe he is outed and the west coast has nothing for him any more, like a job, for whatever reason I see them settling in Scanton, Philly or maybe NY. Am I right? I also think that Pam is going to get Jim back into writing, where he shou,d be and Jim will probably get Pam out of that office and into the art world somehow through his encouragement and prodding. Even more I want to see do they settle doen and get married? Do we get to see some (or at least one) gorgeous, precious baby from Jim and Pam? PLEASE... come and make my dreams come true. We're well into (prob. about halfway) through the 9th and final season of this show. Last year, season 8 missed the mark in so many ways. THis year it's so much back to what it was. We have a wonderful Jim/Pam arc that started at the first ep and is as I understand being driven by Jenna and John and will last us through the end of the show. What a FANTASTIC time to come back and finish up this fabulous story for us. Also, not going to lie... the archieve has been DEAD. The last post was I believe chapter 1 of what is supposed to be a multi chapter fic and it was posted I believe Dec 5, 2012. Today is Jan 23, 2013 and there has been nothing more. If you came back and continued, you would first off give us both fresh reading which we have been dying for and also some closure to this fantastic story. (Don't forget, I'm still holding out hope for you to continue and finish Mifflin Designs, Jim Halpert speaking, like you promised.) I'm also hoping that maybe if we could get an author or two to come and work on their unfinished WIPs, maybe it would start a chain reaction and other authors would do the same. I mean, what a tribute it would be to a show that has mean so very much to so many of us, at least at some point, if many of the skillfully and wonderfully stranded, abandoned WIP were suddenly brought back to life. I have to say, I'm truly holding out hope for you to return because 1) I know you've taken long breaks only to return stronger than ever and give us some truly and beautiful writing 2) I've heard that you have plans to return and I hope that is stuill accurate and 3) you seem to take a great deal of pride in what you write and I just don't think you would give us 16 chapters of The 4th Wall, getting to a pretty pivotal, crucial point and not come back and see the story through to the end. Just tell me, what's it going to take? Back rubs? Pizza and drink of your choice delivery on demand? Cookies... wait... that brings Angela/Dwight to mind and I am NOT offering that, how bout brownies? Ice cream? Whatever it is, I'm not healthy at all but for you, I'd work it out. Please please tell me that this is NOT all we're getting because I ma truly desperate to see this all come full circle. On a different note... I DO hope al, is well with you and yours and your holidays were wonderful. I hope you just encountered writers block and maybe then got out of the groove but hopefully no matter if you are still a fan ofthe show or not, I pray you'll at least finish this (and dare I hope for Mifflin Designs as well?) At least this though. Take care, hope all is well with you and we'll hear from you soon! *hugs*

Where are yooooooouuuuuuu?  :'(