Date: February 24, 2019 12:01 pm Title: Courage, Honesty, and a Broken Window
I can see how this chapter might feel abrupt, but I do think you did a good job of building up to it, so it works.
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 11:45 am Title: Too Little, Too Late?
“Don't leave, Jim. We're a good team, even if you're my worst enemy. And sometimes,” - Dwight let out a muffled cry - “sometimes you're tolerable!”
I love this.
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 11:41 am Title: A Cauliflower for Jim
"John Schneider" does sound exactly like the sort of client Michael would have--and that he'd somehow find a way to re-charm.
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 11:18 am Title: The Blame Game
That last moment definitely sounds like an Office shot, so nice work. Definitely enjoying this story.
1 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2018 08:10 am Title: Back to Work
Great story! Thanks for the ride!
Date: June 29, 2018 08:05 am Title: Courage, Honesty, and a Broken Window
I love this story so much! What a great chapter and coming together. Everyone in this story is so in character and I know this is random but I absolutely love our creed scenes. 😂
9 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2011 02:04 am Title: Schruting It
I definitely enjoyed this story. You have a voice in your writing that is quite distinguishable from other authors on this site. It's a damn shame that this story hasn't gotten more recognition.
I'm looking forward to more of your contributions.
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2011 02:20 pm Title: Lady Troubles
This is such an intriguing and realistic story! Kudos for coming up with a scenario in which Jim decides to leave that seems very real in the Dunder-Mifflin universe. Now that Karen is out of the picture, I wonder what will happen for Pam to realise what she has to do?
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, kreidy! Glad you're liking the story so far. I think the only thing that could really show Pam the light is for Jim to take a job as an exotic dancer, and then for Pam to stumble upon him, gyrating and shirtless on stage, during one of her afternoons out. This seems like the only logical progression from what I've written so far, when you think about it.
Date: March 28, 2011 10:57 am Title: Two Week's Notice
Just catching up with this one, DP. Enjoyable insight into the mind of Oscar. "Log Cabin" cracked me up :D As usual, Meredith and Creed steal the show :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks - glad you liked 'Log Cabin'. I enjoyed it as well. :) And who can resist Creed and Meredith in any office group scene?
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2011 06:45 pm Title: The Blame Game
I think this is a very interesting, believable concept. There's a certain dynamic that's maintained between jim and Michael by maintaining certain boundaries. Mocking Jim is one thing, making Jim he scapegoatwhen it concerns his job and corporate, I don't think Michael realizes what he's done. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Yeah, that was basically my thinking too - I thought it would be interesting for Michael to go over the line. I also wanted to try to write something sort of like an episode in the show, where a simple work-related idea drove the plot, and I was thinking of those simplistic titles the episodes have when 'The Lie' came to mind. I thought about Michael telling a lie about Jim and it just kind of went from there. Glad you like it so far. :)
Date: March 11, 2011 04:40 pm Title: Schruting It
Love the idea so far....keep it going!!!
Date: March 11, 2011 06:22 am Title: Schruting It
That was a really long set up
Date: March 09, 2011 06:58 am Title: Schruting It
Nice start, DoofusPrime. You're a good storyteller. Interested to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Hey, I appreciate the compliment! Glad you like it so far.
Date: March 08, 2011 10:34 pm Title: Schruting It
Seems like a pretty interesting idea. I'll be checking in on this one.
Author's Response: Thanks - hopefully it'll continue being interesting. :)