Date: July 27, 2011 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this - having Spencer as a sounding board worked for me, and I especially liked this - it's the weird kind of connections your brain makes sometimes:
"It is like the universe is taunting her. The sky is blue. Tomorrow is the day after today. All roads lead to Rome. All conversations lead to Jim"
Date: July 17, 2011 05:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastic. Such an original idea and very well-written. I'd love to see a continuation of this.
Author's Response: Again, thank you, thank you, thank you. You have no idea what it means to have such talented people compliment me like this.
Though I'm a little curious - for a continuation, would you rather see short, isolated incidents like this one, or an AU where Spencer interacts more with all the Dunder Mifflin employees? I've got both ideas bouncing around in my head and just cannot choose between them.
9 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unique, riveting, heartfelt. Well done!
Author's Response: My five favorite words. Thank you so much!
Date: July 16, 2011 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting twist! I like Spencer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked him - putting an original character into a story is always a bit of a risk, but none of the other characters really fit the bill for what I wanted to do with Spencer.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2011 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, nice story! I think the details of what was going on with Pam after CN and before the wedding deserves more attention and this certainly helps. It is also very well-written and I liked the idea that there were others in Pam's circle of friends that were skeptical about Roy.
Have you thought about a sequel, where Pam tells Spencer what happened? Maybe invites him to her wedding with Jim? He seemed like an interesting character
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story - and I agree that more attention needs to be put on Pam in between CN and leaving Roy. It's a big step for her, a very important one, as I tried my best to show here.
As for a sequel...who knows? I really like the story and would definitely be interested in expanding on it. If I do end up writing more, I'd probably end up with three total one-shots, this one plus two others.