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Reviewer: GreenEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2006 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Yeah, add me to the list of those who were pleasantly surprised!! Very well written, and really really enjoyable! What a unique premise for these two! Can't wait to read more =)

Reviewer: Verity Kindle Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Ok, at first I was very cynical about a crossover like this, but I LOVE the way you handle the interweaving of the two universes! Pam and Jim are very in-character!! You write so well, I think you can pull it off!!!!! Update, update!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

I wasn't sure if I would like this since I'd never seen The Xmen or anything remotely similar - but I really enjoyed it! It's a very interesting scenario and I'm anxious to see what comes next!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

This is really fun!  I can't wait for more!  And I'm sure you have plenty of great places Pam will be able to take Jim. ;-)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Oooo, unusual and cool! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

I'm loving this. Usually cross-overs don't interest me, but there are amazing talents in this fandom (you should read T*H*E O*F*F*I*C*E - great Mash cross-over).

I know next to nothing about X-Men, but you've captivated me by mixing them in with Jim and Pam. I can't wait to see where this is going. Will Dwight wish he was a mutant, and square off against Angela, who just has to be anti-mutant? Will Creed also be one?

PS - so sad about Pam's mom. Reminds me of Grey's Anatomy.

Reviewer: Peskipiksi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Oh, I can't tell you how excited I am that someone (who can write!) is combining two of my favorite fandoms.  It's off to a great start--can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Very cool idea!  I'm intrigue.

Reviewer: kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

I almost skipped this one based on the premise but I'm glad I didn't.  It was very well written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

This is such an amazing idea, and you have no idea how thrilled I am that you can actually write. Seeing the summary, I prayed that you had talent so that this premise isn't wasted, and I got my wish!

I'm so damn excited for the next chapter. This looks wonderfully promising.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2006 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1: Pam's Illusions

Interesting! I've never watched X-Men [I know, what kind of a sad, sad girl am I?], and I've never read an X-Men comic, either, but I like this - it's actually really nice.

I think what matters the most in a story like this, where something totally new is pulled in, is descriptions, and as far as I can tell, you've nailed those. I'm not confused, I'm basically in awe because I can completely understand their powers and I think they're beyond cool.

Are there any other DunderMifflinite-mutants? Do you have to call them mutants? Can we get rid of Roy now? Ah, so many questions...

Can't wait for an update!! =D



Author's Response:

Not sad! Although you are definitely missing out! X Men is awesome.You can skip the third movie though, that just came out on DVD. Its crap.

 Oh great, I'm glad it wasn't confusing for you. That was a big worry when I was writing their powers. Its so hard to find 8 different ways to describe "and then he moved the coffee pot with his mind." Hee.

 There are other Dunder Millflinite-mutants, but they're staying hush hush for now. And I know what you mean with the mutant thing. Every time I have Jim say the word I laugh. Which is bad. Hopefully that'll...wear off? Hee.

 I'm glad you liked! Thanks for the review! :D

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