8 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2012 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow... a lot of unexpected twists and turns here. Poor Pam obviously is hurting a lot emotionally but she really REALLY needs to let Jim in. I mean, taking care of Pam is what Jim does best and she HAS to understand that first, they should be sharing their loss because they each lost that baby and second that if she hides her suffering and tears from Jim then she can't expect him to know she is feeling anything. Also, going back to work so soon and then the running to and from work after a horrid car accident and a miscarriage, I'm afraid Pam is headed back to the hospital. I'm really worried about them but I have faith that they will work this out.. they have to because they are truly soul mates.
You're doing really good. I am so happy that you are updating so frequently. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much-this is such a lovely review :)
Date: February 07, 2012 11:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh no! What happened? Please continue.
Date: February 06, 2012 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Not feeling well so this will be short... this is a nice start and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you're going to take this. Can't wait til next chapter so we can see what is going on with Pam. (Though I'm a wee bit afraid it's going to make me hate you! )