Date: May 10, 2023 07:02 pm Title: Unspoken
Aww… this is a good fic! Thanks for writing this!
Date: May 10, 2023 07:02 pm Title: Unspoken
Aww… this is a good fic! Thanks for writing this!
Date: May 10, 2023 06:52 pm Title: Fifth Night
And he won't...
Date: May 10, 2023 06:48 pm Title: Merger
Because it is just not the same...
Date: May 10, 2023 06:46 pm Title: Hangover
I don't think he can ever REALLY TRULY move on.
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2023 06:43 pm Title: Wedding News
Ergh! Call!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2023 06:39 pm Title: Moving to Stamford
I am full of emotions! I can’t handle!
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2023 06:36 pm Title: Casino Night
Oof.
1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2023 12:02 am Title: Diversity Day
Yeah not a bad day 😊
1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2023 10:41 pm Title: In the beginning
You know what I like about this one? Is that he said something about anyone else in one sentence. But for the receptionist it’s a whole paragraph and a half. He is so far gone.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2022 07:12 am Title: Unspoken
This is absolutely beautifully written. I agree they didn’t talk much at all their first time. Loved this chapter.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2022 07:07 am Title: Merger
*He watches her sleep, dark hair everywhere, and tries to picture their relationship; going on movie dates, spending all Sunday morning in bed, meeting family, moving in together, getting a dog, giving her a ring.
It doesn't come to him as easily as it always did when he glanced up to reception, but maybe someday it will.*
YES, poor Jim trying so hard to make something happen here. Ugh my heart hurts for him.
Date: April 16, 2022 07:06 am Title: Hangover
Damn. That hurt. And replying to Karen instead? Ouch.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2022 07:02 am Title: Casino Night
He kept the blue chip!
“Maybe because the first time she said "I can't" it sounded like a question.”
Yes. This is the first time I’ve seen this pointed out in fic but YES.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2022 06:59 am Title: In the beginning
EEP. This is perfect!
Date: December 13, 2020 04:36 pm Title: Unspoken
Their silent communication in this chapter... wow. I can't put it any better than that.
Date: December 13, 2020 04:34 pm Title: Fifth Night
Ugh. Karen deserved better. But you can actually kinda see from this how he talks her into staying with him - in no small part because she can tell that he's sincerely trying.
1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 04:30 pm Title: Merger
This is a very solid version of how Jim might have talked himself into Karen - not so much Karen as the opposite of Pam, but his relationship with Karen as a mirror image of his relationship with Pam.
1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 04:29 pm Title: Hangover
I'm a committed member of Team "He Sent Her A Brief Not-Inviting-Follow-Up Text," but his thought process here works, and works well with how he's going to end up approaching her upon his return.
Date: December 13, 2020 04:27 pm Title: Wedding News
Angela as the one who breaks the news is a VERY interesting choice - what made you go with her?
Author's Response: I think I was going for "Who is the last person you'd expect to tell Jim, but would still be plausible." And I could picture Angela, who was pretty aware of the Jim/Pam situation, knowing Pam hadn't contacted Jim and thinking Jim should find out from someone besides Michael or Kelly. As far as what my head-canon of who told Jim is, my money is on Kevin, maaaaaybe Phyllis.
1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 04:25 pm Title: Moving to Stamford
The "if only he could put everything in the box" paragraph is beautiful.
Date: December 13, 2020 04:24 pm Title: Casino Night
"He's actually rather skilled at it by now, always seeing her even when he's not looking at her" is a really good line. And I thought the poker metaphor worked well here.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's definitely one of my favorite lines in this fic.
1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 04:21 pm Title: Diversity Day
This is a beautiful version of what was running through Jim's head here.
Date: December 13, 2020 04:21 pm Title: In the beginning
I like that you've worked in Jim's less-strong (if still pretty on-point) impressions of everyone else into this - and how he's already well aware of the fact that he's not going to be able to move on from how he's feeling. Buckle up, Jim.
1 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2020 03:24 pm Title: In the beginning
I love this, in season 4 when we find out when they each first liked each other, I always wondered how long it’s was between Jim’s first day and pams yogurt. This feels really right.
Author's Response: Yes I had to imagine it was early on, before Jim was very comfortable approaching Pam’s desk. Thanks for reviewing!