1 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2020 12:07 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
Wow. This is really lovely, and it does a great job of capturing the complexities of their relationship at this juncture. Plus this is just stellar Drunk!Pam dialogue.
1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2018 06:26 am Title: put your memories beside mine
Just lovely. I definitely think Pam would spend some time with Meredith in the Scranton bar scene during this time. I really enjoyed how she kept telling him all of the tangible ways she’d made room for him before telling him she’d made room in her heart. I think it’s that very practical part of Pam coming through in a realistic way. And those interruptions from Meredith were a funny draw back to the outside world. Thank you for this.
Date: August 09, 2018 10:57 am Title: put your memories beside mine
It has been several months since I wrote that last review. I have since read lots more stories and this is STILL #1! It is so full of truth and love and unvarnished vulnerability for both of them. Any misunderstandings, any unspoken feelings or thoughts are laid bare and acknowledged and embraced. The fear that paralyzed them both is stripped away, allowing them both to speak, heart-to-heart. Love it! :)
Date: March 07, 2018 12:03 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
This is my #1 favorite story. And I've read a lot of stories. Thank you.
Author's Response: That's so sweet! Thank you so much, I'm glad to hear that
1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2017 07:36 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
This is lovely. I don't really need a followup chapter (and I'm sure one will never be written) but I do wish this was where the show had gone so we did have a followup that way.
Date: February 25, 2017 05:57 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
Part of the fun of these activities is to get into the characters and pretend they are real I have seen this done many times on MTT You are such a good writer, our story becomes real. I will continue to marvel at your skill but I will insult/praise/etc the characters as if they are real. If you don't like it, don't write so well!{Let me have my fanasty world!}
Author's Response:
Hi again Moogie Man!
I'm glad to hear back from you. In light of your comment, I think you are justified in your reasoning, but with respect to your opinions, my heart also goes out to the writers that may feel extremely discouraged by comments that seem insulting to their writing. I know how it feels to become so invested it a story, that your heart leaps and falls with the characters. I wanted to thank you for the compliment though, I am so glad to hear my writing makes you feel that way -- that is truly my motivation as a writer! Anyway, I hope you continue to read and review my other stories!
Kind regards,
msteapot
Date: February 25, 2017 01:03 am Title: put your memories beside mine
Ahhh okay I really like this! The conversation was completely believable; it felt so candid as I read it!
Author's Response:
Hi alittlestitious2,
Thank you so much for another kind review! I'm glad I was able to make their conversation seem believable, I'm so happy to hear that! I hope you continue to read and review my future stories!
Kind regards,
msteapot
Date: February 24, 2017 08:41 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
Well written. Jim still is gutless in the end and Pam, knows she can be slutty as hell, and still get him back. Oh well!
Author's Response:
Hi Moogie Man,
Although I appreciate your review, I would like to add that it is somewhat silly to insult a fictional character. I know I speak for a community of writers when I say kindness and thoughtful critiques are appreciated!
Kind regards,
msteapot
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2017 12:12 am Title: put your memories beside mine
Agreed that there needed to be far more Drunk Pam than the show gave us. But that's what fanfic is for! This was so sweet, and very Jim and Pam, with Jim's hesitancy and Pam's roundabout confession of love. Happy to have you here at MTT!
Author's Response:
Hey NLM,
I know we already spoke, but I wanted to thank you once again for your warm and welcoming comments. I am so glad to be part of this community!
Kind regards,
msteapot
Date: February 23, 2017 07:34 pm Title: put your memories beside mine
Great story, you nailed the drunk Pam character.
Author's Response:
Hi manidfk,
Thanks for your kind words! I truly appreciate the review.
Kind regards,
msteapot
Date: February 23, 2017 10:46 am Title: put your memories beside mine
Your Jim and Pam is spot on!
Jim's confusion and refusal to believe he's hearing what he's hearing and of course Pam Had to get good and drunk to spill her guts and she does it in such a Pam way. Drunk Pam is a favorite of mine, only thing better is a drunk Jim and Pam. I really really enjoyed this and I hope you write more.
Author's Response:
Hi idnaoj80!
Thank you for such a kind review, I loved reading what you had to say! I'd love to write a story that incorporates a drunk Jim, or maybe a drunk Jim and Pam moment. Something I'll definitely think about! I hope you continue to read my stories and share your thoughts on them. Your reviews are much appreciated.
Kind regards,
msteapot