Date: February 25, 2017 12:49 am Title: Health Care
I'm glad you enjoyed writing from Jim's perspective, because that characterisation was fantastic! I could totally hear his voice in my head as I read it.
I really like this idea to vocalise the inner monologue of Jim and Pam in this way to almost summarise each episode, it's a great and engaging idea!
Can't wait for more...
Date: February 23, 2017 11:58 pm Title: Pilot
Yes, love this idea! Reminds me a little of my Expressions in Emoticons fic. So much I like about this first convo, there is already a small part of Pam that knows she's outgrown Roy, and longs for a life outside of him, but he's just a fixture in her life she can't really imagine him not in it. Still, she's rebelling in extremely subtle ways by suggesting they go to another bar, etc.
So next will be Diversity Day from Jim's perspective? Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Hey NoblelandMermaid!
I just wanted to start off by saying how excited I was to see that you reviewed my story -- you're one of my favourite writers on MTT! As for the story itself, I found it difficult to delve into Pam's mind early on in the series, she is so adamant in her faithfulness to Roy yet the flickers of hope she often shows with Jim make me wonder what was really going on in her mind! I'm glad you thought I struck a good balance in terms of that. I hope you continue to enjoy this fiction as much as I enjoy writing it.
Kind regards,
msteapot
Date: February 23, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Pilot
Oooh interesting... I like it! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Hi alittlestitious2,
I love your username! And I'm glad you like the story, I hope you continue reading as it develops. Feel free to leave reviews on following chapters, I'd love to hear from you.
Kind regards,
msteapot