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Reviewer: Vr1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2017 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I posted in the archive of our own forum. The Pam/other stories I posted are kinda pervy,but I think they have believable premises. I have a few more idea's for stories, so hopefully I'll add some more posts. I know a lot of readers on these forums love the idea of Pam and Jim, and that's fine, however I like the idea of someone else catching Pam at the right moment (or creating that moment)

Author's Response: I am a bit burned out on Jim/Pam. No surprises, just a different setting.  They are gonna screw Ho Hum.

Reviewer: Vr1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2017 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pam/Ryan overdone? Not really, HowDroll killed it in Distraction, I'd love to see another Pam/Ryan story as good as that one, I'd also love to see a believeable Pam/Michael, Pam/Toby or Pam/Packer story. I've recently posted a few Pam/other stories on another board featuring characters that I made up but tried to integrate into The Office. I guess the theme would be the average (if that) guy gets the super hot chick that's out of his league, Could Creed pull it off? Could her elderly neighbor? Don't get me wrong, I love Pam's character,but I'd love to see one of those scenario's

Author's Response: Which other board/forums do u use ?

Reviewer: Candi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2017 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just figured this was set sometime in season 9 because that's when Jim wanted Pam to move to Philly. I meant I didn't see chemistry between Pam and Ryan over the course of the show. They always seem to fight like brother and sister. I guess maybe if you touched on that and said Pam and Ryan bickered because they were hiding a secret attraction, that might make it work? If you wanted to expand on it. Totally just suggestions.

Author's Response:

thanks.Well thought  out and expressed.

Reviewer: Candi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2017 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

I understand focusing on season 9 for this especially with Jim being so OOC but I just don't see much chemistry between Ryan and Pam. They feel like siblings who barely tolerate each other. But that's just my opinion.

Author's Response: What is OOC?  I'm a bit confused.  How did I focus on Season? Didn't mean to. I probably need to expand  all of my stories, not just this one.  I think I get so focused on finishing, I start to rush.  My next story( yet to be published) Pam At Pratt is a step in the right direction, I think.  Thanks, you saw things (that I also saw), that may make me a better writer, not just an idea man. I value your input! More response to Candi: Since Jim is asleep,not sure how to build the chemistry. Can you give me some examples of how they seem like siblings. I appreciate your comments.

Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2017 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting concept. I wanted to see Pam and Ryan hook up in this.

Author's Response: There are so many Pam/Ryan (and Jim/Pam) out there, I find them a bit overkill.  I plan to focus on other hook-ups.  How about: Michael/Pam? Alex/Pam? Andy/Pam? Packer/Pam? Only female with any appeal is Pam(Maybe Karen) Wait, it just hit me : More on Donna!  Where is my pen?  Donna we barely knew ye!

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