Date: August 25, 2017 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
My ending is bad! Anyone want to change, feel free.
Date: May 20, 2017 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Personally, I'm not a big fan of smut and would rather see the angst 'will they, will they not' kind of stuff. I think you write Alex/Pam too much also. Hell it took me a minute when reading your first Alex story to remember who the dude was.
Regardless, keep it up with the stories! It's great having new content on this site and I like reading your stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've got one waiting to be validated, another just started.
Date: May 14, 2017 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept! I don't think Pam would have the guts to make this much of a scene in front of strangers though.
Have you considered writing a different theme of story? A lot of your work is about Pam cheating on Jim with Alex or Ryan, it starts to blur together, honestly.
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. However I am a bit confused. On April 27, in your review of Dreaming,Screaming you seemed to want more smut, mentioning HoweDroll, Pam/Packer etc. Now I have too much? Or is it just the cheating factor? Please explain. I agree that HoweDroll's story is the best I've seen, but his is on Pam cheating, albeit reluctantly. Without the cheating, it's just another Jam episode. Please continue to review and don't be shy!