Date: January 26, 2025 11:32 pm Title: Epilogue: The Return
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1 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2025 11:25 pm Title: Mile 1,182
Lovely chapter
Date: January 26, 2025 11:09 pm Title: Mile 1,031
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1 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2025 01:31 pm Title: Mile 980
This chapter is so well done, I especially love the poisoned apple story. The cliffhanger does make me a little nervous though, mainly because this story was recommended to me with the words 'not for the faint of heart'. Let's see if you're one of the authors who let their characters not have a happily-ever-after, or not. I'm here for it either way!
1 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2025 01:40 am Title: Mile 692
The way you intertwine the past with present always keeps me on my toes. Beautifully done!
1 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2025 06:37 am Title: Epilogue: The Return
This may have been one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Trying desperately to ‘get my mojo back’ myself I decided to read some other fics.
As a therapist who works with grief….. WELL F*CKING DONE! I was enjoying each memory chapter and it was not until the realization that this was a grief trip, one whole BEAUTIFUL and disjointed story that is how grief works in our minds, that I fell in love with this world. I saw the whole in an entirely different way. Sometimes stories with memories or flashbacks can be heating or somehow feel out of place. But this…. Wow… absolutely incredible as a beautifully sad whole.
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2024 03:50 am Title: Epilogue: The Return
Im so glad he has Darryl. And i loved them reminiscing together. God my heart ACHES im truly, properly sobbing at this btw.
"The sun sets across the landscape and bathes the house, the pool, his face--as if Pam is there, her lips pressed to his forehead with a tender, lingering kiss, like an invincible, untouchable summer always within his reach, always available."
This was beyond beautiful
Date: December 17, 2024 03:46 am Title: Mile 1,182
Im drowning in a puddle of my own tears. Jim and Pam will always be a story where I will never be able to stomach thinking about their death, in ny mind they live forever even after the entire world ends. It never does, it never should for them, to me. It's like the only acceptable ending for them is no ending. Their love Has to go on. But i love this story. You wrote it so well. This is the only time ive allowed myself to read about their death. This dedication to her was so fitting. "She is - would be- respected forever" my heart cracked.
"And stay here with her." my heart has been blown to smithereens.
Date: December 17, 2024 03:34 am Title: Mile 1,031
...i had suspected but god...reading it..jesus 😭
Date: December 17, 2024 03:25 am Title: Mile 980
This was such a good balm to the last chapter thank you 😭
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2024 03:14 am Title: Mile 918
Oh god...that episode will never ever be easy to watch and this really didnt make it easier ahahah but it's still so good..and I especially like the detail about pratt. A lot of ppl like to bring that up comparing athleap to it but Pam is right bec it's not the same; no kids, only 3 months and only engaged. Sigh so glad they're past this. But it still hurts all the same. Nailed it.
Date: December 17, 2024 03:05 am Title: Mile 829
Okay full disclosure i skipped ahead to chapter 10 to see the warning and while i didnt spoil myself per sey...im very nervous. But this chapter was so great 🥺 especially that bit about Athleap in austin AWWWW
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2024 02:34 am Title: Mile 692
i wish i had words to articulate how precious this was and ending it with her taking the lead like that!? And then him having to stop to call home OH MY HEART
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2024 02:34 am Title: Mile 692
i wish i had words to articulate how precious this was and ending it with her taking the lead like that!? And then him having to stop to call home OH MY HEART
Date: December 17, 2024 02:04 am Title: Mile 646
my heart omg i love their love so much 😭
Date: December 17, 2024 01:54 am Title: Mile 507
It always hurts to read that he may have destroyed some mementos from Pam during this period; i appreciate tho that this is interspersed with their future otherwise I'd be in a puddle of my own tears
Date: December 17, 2024 01:48 am Title: Mile 328
Oh this is absolutely precious 😭😭🥺
Date: June 03, 2022 12:59 am Title: Prologue: The Road
This is a touching story. I don't know I'll ever recover from reading the last few chapters, but I must tell you, despite the heartbreak, I enjoyed every word you wrote.
1 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2020 02:59 pm Title: Epilogue: The Return
As heart-breaking as this story is, it's incredibly well put together. So much love for it.
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 03:49 pm Title: Epilogue: The Return
I just wrote a review that pretty much sums up how I feel about this whole piece a few chapters ago, so I would be repeating myself if I wrote it all again. My first thought after finally finishing this beautiful work was “well this just fucked me right up in the best way.” Excellent excellent world.
1 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2020 03:39 pm Title: Mile 1,031
I read this story as it was being updated and was always so struck with the realities you portrayed. The fights and the love and the hurt and the happiness. I’ve been away for a while and have recently come back as a writer and a reader, and have been picking up where I left off on stories I was actively reading. Again, I am struck with the realities that you have written. As painful as they may be. I didn’t see this coming and didn’t expect it, but I just had to pause in my reading and leaving a review for this chapter because it made me lose my breath. It is beautifully written and heartbreaking and just my god. You’re so good.
1 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2019 11:27 am Title: Prologue: The Road
Wow. I was not expecting this story to turn out the way that it did. I felt so many emotions throughout it that I wasn't expecting. Amazing job.
1 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2019 05:54 am Title: Prologue: The Road
Wow. What an emotional ride that was, I read the story 3 times to get the full effect that you put forth into the story. The heartbreak that you do not see until the recipe is so true to the story. Thank you so much.
1 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2019 06:56 pm Title: Epilogue: The Return
I was SUPER apprehensive about the warning, but... gah!! What a beautiful, beautiful story! I was drawn in to the raw emotions throughout. Well done!
1 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Epilogue: The Return
hi, im new here and i just started reading some jim/pam stories and also your fic happened to be my favourite. its so.. bittersweet. i swear, i cried my eyes out, under my blanket, reading your fic, as if im the one who's losing someone. i just love the story so much
Author's Response: Oh, my goodness! Thank you so, so much! I am so incredibly happy that you enjoyed this so much. :) Being someone's favorite is just...wow, that's really an unbelievable honor. Thank you for reading, commenting, letting me know about your experience--all of it! Most days I try to write for myself, but--let's face it--your comment is the kind that keeps me going. Thank you so much. I've got another long fic going, "False Claims," and I hope you take a gander at it. But even if you don't, I'm so happy you took the time to read this whole fic and comment. <3