Reviews For Benign Valentine
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Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 07, 2018 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so sweet! I laughed out loud at the descriptions of Gabe. And you wrote their friendship in this episode so well. I love to see other pairings because there’s so much story to tell. Jim and Pam are great, obviously, but I love everyone else, too! I know you posted this story a while ago, but I wanted you to know that you have a reader in me and that I hope to see you around more soon!

Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20, 2017 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story, very well-written. As shutterbug mentioned, Andy's dialogue is very believable and in line with how he acted on the show. We'd love to see more of your work here!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I recently started a new job so I apologize that my response is ridiculously overdue!  This is my first Office fic so I'm really just so thrilled that you enjoyed it and the dialogue came off naturally.  I had a lot of fun with it - probably the most fun I've had writing in a long while - so I hope to post more.  This is such a great site! :)

Reviewer: shutterbug Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2017 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved this. Really, really enjoyed it. This line made me giggle: "It would have been a great impression of Kevin, actually, if the circumstances had been different." And the British-accent Andy amused me, too (partly because it was very fitting for Andy). I generally don't care for "talking head" sections in fics, but this one was really cute, and the dialogue was show-worthy. All of the dialogue throughout the fic was show-worthy, honestly--spot-on. This is just lovely and polished and really enjoyable. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I recently started a new job so I apologize that my response is thoroughly overdue!  You know, it's funny you mention the "talking head" because I originally didn't have one in there.  I was worried it wouldn't read organically enough.  But I'm really glad I gave it a shot because I ended up having a lot of fun writing it.  It's awesome to hear that it came across naturally to you and to have the dialogue deemed "show-worthy" - completely made my day!  THANK YOU!!!! :)

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