1 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2020 01:40 pm Title: Subtext
I love this! Totally hot, whew, wow. Like, give me a second to take a cold shower. But also, so heartwarming and sweet! Their love for each other is just palpable. Really beautiful!
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2018 10:45 am Title: Subtext
This is the story that Pam and Jim fans needed. 💜
Date: September 30, 2017 06:08 pm Title: It's a Date
Since I believe the mods here may frown on that sort of thing (understandably), since it's not for everyone
Date: September 30, 2017 06:00 pm Title: It's a Date
Really enjoyed it, very well thought out and fun. You've mentioned that you're open to suggestions, would you be up for a little Pam/Micheal smut? If so you may want to post it on the archives of our own forum
Date: August 17, 2017 07:00 am Title: Subtext
A super fun and steamy read, thanks so much for sharing! I definitely look forward to more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm actually working on a couple of stories right now :) What I believe will be a more realistic (but still steamy) take on their first weekend, where they really get into the trenches and hash things out. And another one that is totally out of left field in terms of canon, based on a throwaway moment from the wedding episode. Can't wait to share :)
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 06:57 am Title: I Wanna Tuck You Like an Animal
Good golly, I think my screen is melting, that was ridiculously hot.
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 06:46 am Title: Little Red Riding Foot
So I'll be totally honest: your end notes in this chapter really took me out of the story. And it's probably mostly me just having been in the Office fandom for a long time and seeing the amount of criticism Pam got and still gets vs all the other pretty flawed characters of the show. I feel you've done fine portraying her in this fic. If you do have a rough time getting into her head, I recommend the Pam Dichotomy where back in the day scrantonbranch got very meta with the Jim/Pam storyline.
Aside from that, another great chapter and now you're gonna have me watching to see if show!Jim displays any foot fetish traits 😉😉
Author's Response: I removed the end note, thank you for pointing this out. I've spent a lot more time in Pam's head since writing this fic, and I feel better writing her than I used to. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 06:12 am Title: Daisy
thought process when reading this:
*Jim grabs Pam's wrists*
"is she really going there right off the bat?"
*Jim asks Pam if she like him holding her down*
"Oh, dang, she is!"
Very bold move move for their first time, I like it! (Of course also made sense Jim couldn't keep up the charade too long) the rest of this was just hot 🔥
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 06:04 am Title: A Three-Minute Tour
Love it, the banter, the painting, the little hint you drop Jim's, ahem, podiatric interests, all great.
(p.s. I realized I also used the term "Chez Pam" in my lastest and I must have subconsciously picked it up from here! 😆)
1 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2017 05:56 am Title: It's a Date
So I have lot of comments and praise about this one but most importantly I can't get over how perfect the screen name "halpme" is, bravo!
Date: July 12, 2017 10:45 am Title: Subtext
Perfect ending. :) I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this; for your first fic, 26 chapters has to be no mean feet! (If you pardon the pun...) It's been amazing wringing, completely caught me off guard at times yet managed to remain believable and cannon-like. There's been some expert smut too! Thank you
Author's Response:
I can't thank you enough for all of the reviews! To quote a great man, Wow.
Thank you so much :) I've actually started another fic already. Working on making it less fantasy (because this one was pretty fantastic with the way it glossed over the past) and more angsty. Still with a happy ending though :)
Date: July 12, 2017 10:37 am Title: I Wanna Tuck You Like an Animal
It is a cracker of a title, AND a chapter! Well done!
Date: July 12, 2017 10:30 am Title: Little Red Riding Foot
It would be really funny if one of these days, someone actually said: "I'm Greg Daniels, I own this intellectual property and I always thought of Jim as a foot fetish kinda guy tbh."
Well for someone who isn't a Pam fan, you certainly write well for her! I don't really agree with you there, but each to their own, haha :)
Date: July 12, 2017 10:18 am Title: Stripped Bare
Your reference game is on fire, my friend!
Date: July 12, 2017 10:05 am Title: Who's on First?
You're right, I hate you. :)
Date: July 12, 2017 10:03 am Title: Catching Dreams
Ahhh remember the days of iPod Touches? Hehe! Such a sweet chapter :)
Date: July 12, 2017 09:58 am Title: Chapter 19 - Flexual Intercourse
Oh my God... Such a cheeky little chapter hehe
Date: July 12, 2017 09:45 am Title: Pamdora's Box
Honestly, the line "always the quiet ones" was absolutely perfect and completely summed up the entire fic haha! In some magical and skilled way, you have managed to make Jim, Pam and dom/sub actually work. It actually seems believable, which I certainly would never have thought before! The more I think about it, the more it actually makes sense for Pam to be a bit of a submissive, and only really let that side of her bubble to the surface once she was in a safe and loving relationship! Bravo! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 09:29 am Title: Taming of the Sinew
Omg as soon as I read the title of the chapter I was applauding you! And upon reading said chapter, the context of what's written in it actually makes sense with the themes in the play itself! I would be proud too!
P.S I actually died when she asked him to get her a glass of water haha
Date: July 12, 2017 09:11 am Title: Spicy Tuna and the Carnivore
If I had been eating rice at the time, I too would have spat it out omg! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 09:05 am Title: Mall Brats
I read your note at the end and felt the companionship that someone is as obsessed with The Office as I am! YES! :)
Date: July 12, 2017 09:00 am Title: Rushin' Green
Ah I wonder what shop Mr Jim Halpert wants to go to...
Date: July 12, 2017 08:57 am Title: Daisy
Jesus Christ. Where did that come from omg hahaha?! Honestly, I think I spat out my drink,, I did NOT see that coming.. I'm not usually one for dominant/submissive stuff but here I am definitely willing to give it a shot! That was sooo hot...
Date: July 12, 2017 08:33 am Title: Don't Stop Us Now
Ima just keep reading... ;)
Date: July 12, 2017 08:25 am Title: Home Baconomics
Ohhh why can't he go downstairs yet... (And breakfast in bed? Omg!)