Date: July 12, 2017 08:18 am Title: Dream On
Haha I love your little note at the end! So true! I also love the line, ' "I love that we love eachother." ' I just think that it was really cute :)
Date: July 12, 2017 08:07 am Title: Reign Dance
"As you wish.." YES! Clever!
Date: July 12, 2017 07:58 am Title: Adios Motherfuckers
Right, how have you managed mixing a cocktail come across as erotic? Talent my friend, pure talent...
Date: July 12, 2017 07:46 am Title: Que Shiraz, Shiraz
Ugh oh! Are we gonna get to see some of drunk Jim and Pam? I must read on to continue! (The real question that remains to be answered is of course whether red and white wine do really make orange...)
Date: July 12, 2017 07:30 am Title: Castle of the Lonely King
Sorry for the late review-- Mmmm bath time with Jim, (and a king-sized bed for that matter...)! As ever, the writing is really good too!
1 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2017 07:24 pm Title: It's a Date
WOW, haven't read it yet but the passion and energy necessary to write a 15+ chapter Office fic is crazy! Welcome to the site, your enthusiasm for the show and penning stories is an awesome addition here.
1 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2017 11:59 am Title: It's a Date
Loved it. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know the fandom has kinda died off since the show ended. Glad to do my little part to keep it alive :)
1 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2017 10:14 pm Title: It's a Date
I love that this story goes beyond smut, its raw and passionate and so so honest. I was captivated chapter by chapter at the increasing connection between Jim and Pam. Your writing really draws the reader into their dynamic both in and out of the bedroom (and tub?). Definitely one of my new faves.
Author's Response: I really appreciate your kind words! I've read a lot of takes on their first date, and I just can't see either Jim or Pam being content to go out to dinner and back to two separate apartments. :)
Date: July 07, 2017 07:31 pm Title: Surprise!
#beyondexcitedforthenextchapter
A necessary, cathartic chapter; bravo!
Date: July 07, 2017 07:19 pm Title: Madame Beesly and Dr. Halpert
Omg I could just imagine the wink based on the season 6 cold open with the Morse code... As previously mentioned, your dialogue is fantastic and since this chapter is basically all conversation, it is therefore by nature fantastic!
Date: July 07, 2017 07:06 pm Title: A Three-Minute Tour
"Me too. Let's literally eat," has to be my favourite line! Your dialogue is really really good! In my head it sounds just like them talking! :)
Date: July 07, 2017 06:54 pm Title: It's a Date
I promise you I will review every single chapter of this passion project of yours... I am extremely excited by this! The instant messaging was sooo good and seemed cannon, (Don't Stop Believing banter before it was cool), and can I just say that "halpme" is a stroke of genius!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the chapter reviews! I feel like flow is not necessarily my strong point, so any feedback that you have is SO appreciated.
Date: July 07, 2017 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Flexual Intercourse
Haven't read this yet, but great chapter tiitles!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your words :) If you do read it and feel like sharing your thoughts, good OR bad, please don't hesitate.
1 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2017 02:46 pm Title: It's a Date
Excellent work, Rach3l! For your first story you really hit it out of the park. Wow. I think you totally nailed the characters and their personalities. Never thought about Jim with a foot fetish, but damn if I didn't believe it coming from you. The smut was super hot.
Loved that you submitted the story in its full form. I could not stop reading! Also have to give a shoutout to your reference of The Who! They've been a favorite band of mine for a looooong time. Nice to see them get some JAM love.
I look forward to reading more of your writing Rach3l!
Author's Response: Wow, my first review and such a glowing one. Thank you! I'm still trying to decide whether I want to tackle more JAM content. I really appreciate your words :)