1 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2020 03:10 pm Title: Back to Work
love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2018 10:56 am Title: The Parking Lot
This was so great! Really looking forward to more from you.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
1 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2018 04:05 am Title: Epilogue
Great job! I can't wait to read your next work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm currently in the very beginning stages of a piece that takes place after Pam gives Jim advice on how to handle the Karen getting an apartment situation and Dwight finds her crying.
1 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2018 11:47 am Title: Epilogue
Sweet ending! Look forward to reading more from you soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, BigTuna! Same to you :)
1 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2018 10:38 am Title: Back to Work
Just read this whole story! Glad you are back. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you, BigTuna!
I'm aiming for the next chapter to be an epilogue of sorts.
I really appreciate your reading and reviewing.
It means the world.
Date: March 30, 2018 06:22 am Title: Back to Work
I was just thinking about this the other day! Glad to see you’re writing again :)
And bringing the drama! I like it...even if Jim did get hit.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
Date: November 21, 2017 05:50 am Title: The Fist Date: Part Four
Aww... the sweetness continues. I love how being apart wasn’t one of his options d84;a039;
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!!
Haha no way! Not after how long it's taken these crazy kids to find each other.
Date: November 10, 2017 06:46 pm Title: The First Date: Part Three
Wow! You’ve been busy!
Their date has been so adorably sweet. I’m loving that Pam is so sure about the recent changes she’s made and the direction she’s heading (with Jim).
Author's Response: Your reviews mean so much! Writing this story is so therapeutic for me!
Date: November 01, 2017 08:23 pm Title: The Pick-Up
I could almost feel his nervousness at first. But once he reached her he seemed to relax quite a bit.
Nice ending to this chapter! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2017 10:56 am Title: The Pick-Up
Aw, this is adorable. I'm looking forward to the date!
Author's Response: Thanks!! So am I, believe me!
Date: October 26, 2017 11:25 am Title: The Phone Call
Oooo.... a “date” date?!? :D
I love these little snippets of courage and honesty from Pam, while all this is very new for her she still feels comfortable and safe with him.
( I had to go back and find the part about Stamford, it had been so long since I had read that chapter I completely forgot about it! And you definitely made it clear that the transfer wasn’t finalized so he was free and clear.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
I think Jim definitely sees it as a "date" date, but we'll see how Pam feels in the next chapter. Ah, I love getting to live vicariously through Pam! It never gets old...
Date: October 26, 2017 09:28 am Title: The Phone Call
Just wanted to chime in and say I'm still really enjoying this fic. Keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: Thanks, I plan to!
1 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2017 08:27 pm Title: The Parking Lot
I'm definitely enjoying this. I'd agree with Becauseofyou that the pacing here suggests a longish story word-wise so an outline would be a good idea. I'm intrigued by how actually meeting her parents will go--what do they think of Roy? Of him? Of her?
And is your Pam an "I need time" Pam or an "I've had time" Pam when the chips are down?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and your suggestions!
I'll definitely get to work on an outline. This is my first time writing fanfiction and so there's a bit of a learning curve.
I'll think about how Pam's parents think of Roy/Jim and maybe revisit a real meeting between Jim and her parents.
I think my Pam might be a nice mix of the "I need time" Pam and the "I've had time" Pam, but we'll see. Thanks again, and stay tuned! :)
Date: October 18, 2017 07:28 pm Title: Saturday Night Conversations
I can just see him laying there with a big happy smile on his face feeling light for the first time in... forever.
Plot suggestions, hmmm... I would recommend figuring out how you want to end this and work on filling in the gaps. Your pacing suggests this isn’t going to be ending soon, if you suddenly end after their first date I would really be surprised. It feels like a story that will take us a little further than that honestly.
It’s obviously already AU but do you want it to sort of follow the shows timeline or do you have a different life in mind for them? A tentative outline is always a good idea :)
I am curious how you will have him deal with Stamford and then her reaction to all of that. Things have been going pretty smooth for them so far so maybe some difficulties could arise from that situation??
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Admittedly, this is my first fanfic ever, and I didn't really have a solid plan in mind for how the story would end when I started. I obviously wanted (and still want) Jim and Pam to live happily ever after, but that was basically it. I will definitely take your suggestion and try to outline the story. I had originally thought that this fic would basically follow the show's timeline, but now that it seems Jim and Pam will get together a lot earlier than in the show, it seems that might change their future as well.
In this story, Jim isn't taking the transfer. He hadn't decided yet before he confessed his love to her in the parking lot, and then once Pam made it clear she wasn't going to marry Roy he promised her that he would stay in Scranton. But I love the idea about the two of them going through hard times. a86;
Date: October 16, 2017 06:47 pm Title: Back into Reality
Ouch! Poor Jim. He was so excited and nervous to meet Helene, twice, and barely got a chance this second time. I know, it’s not about Jim right now...
Staying tuned!
Author's Response: I know! I just thought that after her daughter suddenly calling off her wedding, Helene's attention would be focused almost entirely on Pam. But fear not - I'm sure Jim will have plenty of opportunities to make a good impression on the Beesly's.
Date: October 14, 2017 09:09 pm Title: The Parking Lot
Wish I had more jelly beans. Loving every chapter! Your story rings so true -- can't wait! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I promise more is coming!
1 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2017 06:45 pm Title: Look, a New Day Has Begun
Aww..swoon! He's off to a great start!
Author's Response: Aww shucks :)
Date: October 03, 2017 10:15 pm Title: The Parking Lot
Having a hard time waiting . . . . Love this!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I've been having some major writer's block, but I'm going to keep on keeping on :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2017 08:48 am Title: This is What Love Feels Like
Is it weird that I find her leaving all of the lights on the oddest thing about that ending?
I get that that she might be nervous and uncomfortable in a different space... but the bedroom light too?
Can't wait to see what you do with this.
Author's Response:
Haha nope, not weird at all. I was trying to make it seem like she was so exhausted from the emotions of the day that she just fell asleep before turning off the lights, maybe didn't have the energy to get back up once she was in bed.
Anyway, thanks for reviewing! I'll try to get more chapters up soon! At this point, I'm not even sure exactly where the story is going, but I'm figuring out as I go! :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2017 08:36 am Title: Facing the Future
Yummmm.... Friendly's. I have black raspberry in my freezer right now, my favorite!
Author's Response: The BEST! :P
Date: September 25, 2017 02:06 pm Title: Facing the Future
Really enjoying this so far, a lovely little story. Really cool use of canon dialogue mixed with AU as well. Can't wait to read on!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I definitely plan on getting some more chapters up this week a86;
1 [Report This]Date: September 22, 2017 03:47 pm Title: Facing the Future
This is a sweet and enjoyable read so far, good work for your first fix!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Hopefully I'll have more chapters up this weekend 🙂
1 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2017 02:00 pm Title: A Safe Place to Rest Your Head
I like how this is going! The level of tension and wavering is really nice. Does Jim realize he can buy a phone charger when he's out too, or does he want her phone to be off anyway? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hahaha very good question. I just might address it in the next chapter 😉
Date: September 15, 2017 09:54 am Title: A Change of Scenery
I've already used up all my jellybeans for this story!! Love, love, loving this. Can feel the momentum rising! Keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: Awww shucks! As always, thanks so much! :)
Date: September 12, 2017 11:31 am Title: The Office: After Hours, Part Three
Ack I can't read chapter 4! But so far I'm enjoying your AU casino night :)
I would like to suggest when posting to MTT that you use the default color, background, and font size for your stories because we have a few different skin options to choose from and changing font color wont really work for every skin, every time.
I personally use the 27 second skin because of my migraines and eye issues but when I got to chapter 4 it was unreadable do to the custom coloring.
Anyway, I'll just switch for now because I definitely need to find out what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll keep that in mind, and look into making my story more accessible to all readers. :)