1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2019 12:31 pm Title: Tech-Knowledgy
Hey Sadiq. This moment is particularly well done in both believability and Office-type unintended consequences.
1 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2019 12:29 pm Title: Fallout
I have been reading this (technically re-reading) and not reviewing because I had a common comment: these are all great. I just wanted to stop in here and say that the transition among epistolary and non-epistolary chapters is very, very well done.
1 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2018 11:12 am Title: DUI
You write them so so well. I really loved this!
1 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2018 04:36 pm Title: The Beginning
I love this glimpse into what Pam is thinking. And i love how you wrote Pam, so much more assured than she comes across but without pushing to to a level that becomes believable. I love how she incorporated things she wrote in the emails into the letter. I had an idea a few days ago to do something similar a la “Dear Mr Henshaw” but now I don’t know if I can because you did this so well! Great job.
1 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2017 09:00 am Title: The Beginning
Wonderful story and fantastic last chapter! :)
1 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2017 08:57 am Title: The Letter
Such a good letter! My eyes are all teary, though -- is someone slicing onions?
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2017 01:40 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh, so good!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Happy you enjoyed it.
1 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2017 08:02 pm Title: The Beginning
very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2017 01:56 pm Title: DUI
This is such a good premise for a story !! You kept both Jim and Pam true to their character, and your ending was adorable !!
Date: September 02, 2017 09:44 am Title: DUI
Oh. My. Gosh! This had EVERY element I LOVE about Jamfiction! Their voices are true. The story started, seamlessly adding backstory to the existing canon. Then it started to take little turns in a completely believable, delightful, imaginative way. And you brought it home with a flourish of joy! You hooked me big time! Just wonderful! Thank you. :)
Date: September 02, 2017 02:51 am Title: The Beginning
I love this one so much! And you should definitely write in this tone again because it really works. This last chapter had AMAZING dialogue in it between them, I have to say! I seriously can't wait to read whatever you're gonna post next :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always look forward to hearing from you.
Date: September 02, 2017 02:34 am Title: The Letter
This puts the whole of season 3 Pam into words:
But after how long I'd been with him (nine years… yikes), I needed time to find out who I was after the dust settled. I realize that time was the one thing you didn't have to give. And you know what? That's okay.
Bravo!
Date: September 02, 2017 02:27 am Title: Tech-Knowledgy
Omg I should've seen this coming! This fic is amazing thus far! :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2017 07:16 pm Title: The Beginning
Great story! It was really well-written, and captivating from the beginning to end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)