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Oooh my goooodddd this is SO beautiful and SO heartbreaking. How do you do that? Just the way you wind these words together to convey so much emotion and paint such a picture is AMAZING. I can’t wait to see where this is headed.

Fantastically written start and I am definitely already hooked. I have actually not read a fic with this premise before and I’m glad that this one will be the first because I think you’re just so talented. Your descriptors are amazing and I’m so jealous of the way that you can convey such emotion with just a few simple sentences. I can’t wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know this one has been done a few times, but I wanted to give it my own shot. Hopefully it doesn't disappoint :)

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Wow! What an absolutely amazing, impactful way to begin a new story that right off shows such promise. I’ve seen one or two stories started with this premise of Pam gets into an accident at some point after she and Jim became a couple only to wake up and not remember that she was with Jim and Roy is the past. What I’m sincerely hoping you do that these other authors did not is keep writing. The one I can think of pretty much ended with her waking and insisting that she and Roy were a couple and Jim leaves devastated. I think that one made it maybe 3-5 chapters, got its hooks in me then left me high and dry. I will say, based on your recent history I have full confidence that not only will you not leave us high and dry, I believe you’ll write a detailed interesting story that you’ll see alll the way through. I have a tough time writing reviews very often but I can promise you, I’m always, ALWAYS here reading. Stories like this have a hold on me because I have brain issues myself, had surgeries on my brain and actually need more but I’m going to have to travel out of state and we’ll, it’s not something I look forward to. That’s why I’m on here reading so much. This site is just everything to me and these stories have gotten me through so many terribly long desperately painful days. That’s actually how I found the show and more specifically Jim and Pam, I had to have something that could get me through some really awful times nd this amazing couple honestly saved me. Anyhow... sorry to ramble about that.

I want to bring up an issue that I don’t know if you’re aware of or not. I’m just wondering if you would at least consider changing, modifying, whatever but doing something about the title. As soon as I saw your title on top the recents a confused question mark formed above my head. (Ok, it wasn’t really there but it sounds neat!). See we have two stories that are two of my VERY favorites, Learning to Love Again written by Dedeen and Learning to Live Again written by Italian food. Thing is, Learning to Love Again even has a similar accident/amnesia plot. I find it confusing to keep straight which is which already, I can just imagine how tough it would be with a third story thrown in. On top of that, I’d hate for you to miss out on readers because they see the title and know they’ve read a story by that title, not realizing this is a new one. I hope you won’t hold it against me that I’ve asked, just like there will be no hard feelings if you decide to keep it the same.

Ok... like I’ve said, this is a wonderful solid start and I cannot wait to see where it takes us. I do hope that you’ll keep our, nd Jim’s misery as minimal as possible as far as how long Pam’s time with Roy will last. Of course, that’s your call. I just know that for me, I tend to lose interest when an author drags it out too long. Just my two cents though I’m sure it’s not even worth that! 😉. I will be VERY impatiently looking forward to the update.

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