1 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2018 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oooh that ending is simply mean. In a very good way.
1 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2018 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
I started reading this one over on fanfiction.net then saw it was also posted here. Very well done. I work in the medical field and this seems very realistic. I really like how Jim has been drawing Pam out. It's slow, but steady and appears to be working. Well done, it's very easy to picture the scenes while reading.
Date: April 10, 2018 05:56 am Title: Chapter 7
I really love the dream sequences and the way you’ve progressed in the story, time wise. My favorite was the one of them as dogs. That made me laugh out loud. I think you’ve done a realistic job with having her memories (hints of memories, rather) start to drift back slowly (probably frustratingly, for her) and I just really enjoy this story!
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2018 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
I can’t imagine how difficult it is to write a story like this, intertwine flashbacks and present day and have these conflicting emotions and thoughts and keep it all straight. So don’t worry about taking your time, each update is worth the wait! Excellent as always, can’t wait to read the aftermath of what Pam overheard.
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2018 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, I can kind of believe that Pam would still stay with Roy that far into the relationship prior to meeting Jim.
I’m huge into timelines in stories and was thinking Jim was still living in Stamford so this chapter threw me a bit. But it works and should definitely be more convenient for them!
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2018 05:28 am Title: Chapter 6
So far from telling you she wouldn't take him back, I thought that was one of the...let's not say better because I loved all of this and also it's depressing but most sadly realistic moments. Please do keep this one alive, hard as it must be to jigsaw together.
Date: April 05, 2018 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay! They're back! I was wondering why Roy was being so sheepish. And poor Jim -- so heartbroken. And this is a new flavor of clueless Pam. But it sounds like she just got a big clue! Thanks Agian, for taking pity on my begging. You hooked me with this story!
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, that was adorable and so heart-wrenching at the same time. On my first read through, really late last night, I actually teared up a bit when jim did and that’s really unusual for me. But he was given a bit of hope to cling to and clearly the connection is still there, she still feels a strong pull to him, now she just needs to figure out why.
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 06:47 am Title: Chapter 5
Okay that managed to be both adorable and in tune with the rest of your traumatic brain injury concept. Bravo.
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 06:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Ugh so sweet and heartbreaking and I just can’t wait to see what happens next. I loved their dialogue; I loved the way her body and her subconscious knows that she wants to talk to Jim and make him laugh, even if she doesn’t remember who he is. Can’t wait to read more!
1 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2018 07:51 am Title: Chapter 4
I knew this chapter was coming and I needed it. I needed to know how to feel about Roy, I needed to know he wasn’t taking advantage of the situation, of a woman completely vulnerable right now. I’m not wholly convinced he’ll handle it properly but I feel better about his role.
But my goodness, your writing is killing me lately... huge change from when you just wouldn’t let them in each other’s pants, lol!
1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2018 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
I honestly don’t think I’ve ever read anything from Roy’s point of view. I am excited to see that incorporated into this story! It’s probably one of the most heartbreaking things I’ve read, for all involved. You do it SO well. Can’t wait to read more!
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2018 10:21 am Title: Chapter 3
I kind of keep a running list of Jamfic ideas that I would like to see written on my computer and this is actually one that I've been wanting to see. Love it so far, you writing is great and the story is compelling. You commented that you couldn't believe you were writing about Pam being in love with Roy yet I feel like you've captured Pam's mindset really well. I admit when I read it initially I thought "well Pam is in her early 20s by now, surely she's not still that enamored with Roy and with his high school glory days" but maybe that was the whole thing, when things were good with Roy it took Pam back to those carefree teenage days into her feeling lucky to have a football star choosing to be with her. Anyway it should be interesting especially with Pam's mom already very much on Jim's side of things. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 20, 2018 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your style of writing is so entrancing, and this story is no exception. I’m typically not a fan of hurt/comfort stories to be honest, but I’m ever so slightly addicted to your writing, so here we are. Wonderful so far, as always.
Date: February 20, 2018 07:24 pm Title: Prologue
Awesome topic choice here and very well written. Looking forward to more!
Date: February 20, 2018 05:58 pm Title: Prologue
First chapter in and I can already tell this is going to be angst city here on out! I can't wait >:)
Love these two so much and love your writing, thank you for sharing your talent with us d84;a039;
Date: February 20, 2018 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
STOP. STOP IT RIGHT NOW.
Actually, keep going. Forever, thanks. Can’t wait for the next update.
Date: February 20, 2018 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is so amazing. I'm at work so I can't go into the detail I'd love to, but you have so NAILED this! You so thoroughly, and yet simply capture Pam's point of view with amazing detail.
But for some reason, what riveted me the most was "Though her mother and father stood side by side, hands clasped like vice grips, the fingers on Helene Beesly’s left hand were clutched around a wrist she’d never seen before."
Somehow, this struck me hard as an extremely intimate and tender image. Pam's mom is not quite close enough to Jim to hold his hand, but she sure as heck is not going to let him go anywhere.
Okay, bring on the next chapter, PLEASE! :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2018 11:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Holy hell! You are killing me here... too many emotions going on right now.
Date: February 19, 2018 11:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Holy Moley, this is powerfully written. Can't wait for the next installment! :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2018 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh my goooodddd this is SO beautiful and SO heartbreaking. How do you do that? Just the way you wind these words together to convey so much emotion and paint such a picture is AMAZING. I can’t wait to see where this is headed.
Date: February 16, 2018 05:49 pm Title: Prologue
Keep going! I want to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I've got high hopes for this one :)
Date: February 16, 2018 08:23 am Title: Prologue
Fantastically written start and I am definitely already hooked. I have actually not read a fic with this premise before and I’m glad that this one will be the first because I think you’re just so talented. Your descriptors are amazing and I’m so jealous of the way that you can convey such emotion with just a few simple sentences. I can’t wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know this one has been done a few times, but I wanted to give it my own shot. Hopefully it doesn't disappoint :)
1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2018 06:48 am Title: Prologue
I have to agree with much of what Tina said, my first thought reading this was that yes, I have actually seen this idea before a couple times but they NEVER finish them. And it’s such a bummer to me because this is such a guilty pleasure of mine.
But I also have absolute faith in you and I have become such a fan of yours. I will be reading and reviewing faithfully.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Don't worry, the plan is to see this through to the end. After reading Jenna's book, I'm determined to be a "finisher" this year ;)
1 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2018 12:22 am Title: Prologue
Wow! What an absolutely amazing, impactful way to begin a new story that right off shows such promise. I’ve seen one or two stories started with this premise of Pam gets into an accident at some point after she and Jim became a couple only to wake up and not remember that she was with Jim and Roy is the past. What I’m sincerely hoping you do that these other authors did not is keep writing. The one I can think of pretty much ended with her waking and insisting that she and Roy were a couple and Jim leaves devastated. I think that one made it maybe 3-5 chapters, got its hooks in me then left me high and dry. I will say, based on your recent history I have full confidence that not only will you not leave us high and dry, I believe you’ll write a detailed interesting story that you’ll see alll the way through. I have a tough time writing reviews very often but I can promise you, I’m always, ALWAYS here reading. Stories like this have a hold on me because I have brain issues myself, had surgeries on my brain and actually need more but I’m going to have to travel out of state and we’ll, it’s not something I look forward to. That’s why I’m on here reading so much. This site is just everything to me and these stories have gotten me through so many terribly long desperately painful days. That’s actually how I found the show and more specifically Jim and Pam, I had to have something that could get me through some really awful times nd this amazing couple honestly saved me. Anyhow... sorry to ramble about that.
I want to bring up an issue that I don’t know if you’re aware of or not. I’m just wondering if you would at least consider changing, modifying, whatever but doing something about the title. As soon as I saw your title on top the recents a confused question mark formed above my head. (Ok, it wasn’t really there but it sounds neat!). See we have two stories that are two of my VERY favorites, Learning to Love Again written by Dedeen and Learning to Live Again written by Italian food. Thing is, Learning to Love Again even has a similar accident/amnesia plot. I find it confusing to keep straight which is which already, I can just imagine how tough it would be with a third story thrown in. On top of that, I’d hate for you to miss out on readers because they see the title and know they’ve read a story by that title, not realizing this is a new one. I hope you won’t hold it against me that I’ve asked, just like there will be no hard feelings if you decide to keep it the same.
Ok... like I’ve said, this is a wonderful solid start and I cannot wait to see where it takes us. I do hope that you’ll keep our, nd Jim’s misery as minimal as possible as far as how long Pam’s time with Roy will last. Of course, that’s your call. I just know that for me, I tend to lose interest when an author drags it out too long. Just my two cents though I’m sure it’s not even worth that! 😉. I will be VERY impatiently looking forward to the update.
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