Date: January 31, 2019 07:18 am Title: Chapter 18
Oh that is adorable. Thanks for letting the characters do what they wanted to, because this feels... well, like the warmth you describe Pam feeling in Jim's shirt. I'm very interested to see how the visit goes. She's gonna have to deal with Michael...
Date: January 31, 2019 05:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Keep on sending this unplanned chapters! This one is lovely, and I think manages to show how really confusing it is for Pam to start having very intimate memories with someone that is practically a stranger.
Thanks for the update!
Date: January 30, 2019 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 17
Nice chapter here. The flashback was very sweet as was their interaction in Pam's bedroom. She so much wants to remember.
Like I said in my review last chapter, there looks like there's a cable across the chasm separating her from her memories of Jim. It may be slow, but it's being added to and it looks like Pam really want's to keep building on it. Great writing as always.
Date: January 30, 2019 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh this is cute. I mean. It generally is. But this is particularly so. And I like how Pam is trying to treat Jim right even though she can't necessarily remember why.
Date: January 30, 2019 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ouch my heart. But so lovely how, in their sleep, they always manage to find one another. My favourite line? "But it’s not fair to you, either."
There you go, Pam. It's not just about you, you know?
(I also love love love that this update came this soon, thanks a lot!)
Date: January 28, 2019 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
Man, I’ve been an awful reviewer lately but I really do love this story so so much.
Pizza I can probably do though :) you come to MV before summer and I’ll get you some Gios!
Date: January 28, 2019 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
What kind of pizza?
This was really beautifully done! I love the fact that you not only describe Pam's confusion. You manage to transmit it through your words, and in one chapter you manage to show the rollercoaster that her own emotions and memories are.
And Jim. Oh gawd, I just want to hug him and tell him it's going to be ok. But Pam did it great, so there.
Thanks so, so much!
Date: January 28, 2019 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this story a lot, and this chapter fits in very well. Even if you're not 100% proud of it, there's a couple really great points I noticed:
"It was the week he had started working at Dunder Mifflin." This explains so much about your Melissa plotline and also Pam's behavior that week as reported in canon, so nicely done.
And Jim's reaction to her I can't and her noticing his reaction are both very well done too. It's very touching. Looking forward to whatever you were setting up here.
Date: January 28, 2019 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
You consider this a filler chapter? Really? The depth of emotions here are far too widespread and complex to call this a filler chapter. For example, one can almost see Jim's heart about to shatter there near the end when Pam starts off that sentence with, "I can't." I mean seriously, this is a great chapter for this story.
Part of life is dealing with all the ups and downs. It may be a bit unfortunate that Pam has to re-live some of the downs, but she'll also get to re-live all the ups as well.
"I can't remember being with you Jim, but I can feel it." All this while I've been kind of picturing this kind of wide chasm separating Pam from her memories of Jim. There have been times where there have been bridging attempts. Until now though, they've come close to fixing a line across to re-build a bridge to Jim but none has really stood up. Now though, at least for me with that sentence of Pam's, there's a thin, but solid cable across that chasm. Something that will stick and stay secure. Something both Jim and Pam can build on to bring themselves back to each other.
A filler chapter? Far be it from me to put words into the mouth of an author, but personally I don't see this as such. Great job as always.
Date: January 13, 2019 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ok. So now I've finished all chapters in their proper order for reals, no cheating. The question is, what can I possibly do to make you post an update? Pretty please with sugar on top?
Date: January 13, 2019 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
About time!!
I know, I know, you were building up and toying with ppl's amotions ans whatnot but I was just screaming for this to happen. :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Next scene: Jim being wheeled to the ER because a heart attack is threatening to do him in.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
So, my heart hurts even more. Who can we write at which TV chain to make this happen in a movie or something? Seriously.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow! So I came back to read it all
Haven't reviewed the other chapter because I was just too into the story. My heart aches in all the right places. Great, amazing story!
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 10:39 am Title: Chapter 15
I'm going to be honest here. I read the prologue, and it broke my heart, so I cheated and came right to this last chapter. I promise I'm going to read the other ones, now that I know that you're not planning for them to be misserable forever.
Great story! Are you planning on updating it anytime soon?
Date: January 06, 2019 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aw Dwight, ya old softy.
I love that out of all of the things Pam could start remembering, its crabs and the NBA that break through to her. It's so great.
But also, hi there mysterious nicknames and slightly flirty text messages.
I have no idea where this is going... I mean, I do as in big picture, but I have no idea what the next memories or interactions are going to be, and I'm okay with waiting to see.
Date: December 28, 2018 08:27 am Title: Chapter 15
Yay! An update! And it's a good one too! Dwight being nice to Jim like that was a nice touch. Shows that they're really the best of frenemies.
Of course the highlights are of Pam starting to recall things and feelings. I loved how Jim is Pickles in her phone. Seeing them start to reconnect like this, after everything, is very sweet. Hopefully we'll see it continue in forthcoming updates.
Date: December 27, 2018 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay! It's back! I had to go back and re-read the last couple chapters to get my footing again, but I simply love this story. You really reach straight for the heartstrings with this one, especially with the contrasting POVs.
1 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2018 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
Cece, you brilliant, adorable, little angel! This chapter is so great.
I love the flashbacks you've come up with in this story - the little sprinkles of their progressing relationship. It makes the current time even more heartbreaking. Not to state the obvious or anything, but it'd really be swell if Pam got her memory back soon.
But honestly, as long as you keep piecing them back together the way you started to in this chapter, I'm okay with waiting too.
Date: October 03, 2018 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
No. No, no, no, I refuse to feel bad for Roy here. Except maybe I do. A teensy tiny bit. But not enough to change anything. He's still dumb and I don't like him.
You know who I do like though? Penny. Penny's a great sister and I love that she was there to be the voice of reason for Pam this chapter. I too, can be persuaded to do just about anything for a blueberry muffin, so well played, Penny.
She cant let go of the t-shirt. Let him in, Pam!
Date: October 03, 2018 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
*gasp* How dare you!
I didn't think Jim could get much better but then you put him in a waiting room with the cutest little girl ever and Hannah Montana and he's... well, he's even more dreamy.
Now Pam just needs to see how dreamy he is.
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2018 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
I was so excited to see an update to this story! I loooove the grocery store scene. Jim's silent hopefulness about their future while keeping up the banter (love when he answered, "okay, crazy") is wonderful and incredibly in-character.
Thank you thank you thank you for more NY Penny. I love her empathy and wisdom in this chapter; you can be tough AND opinionated AND empathetic AND a caretaker. You captured that balance beautifully.
"You do too snore" Bahaha! GREAT!
This line: "It was too much and just what she needed all the same." Man, if that doesn't describe Pam on a normal day, much less with a traumatic brain injury.
Every single word of that last paragraph was great. It left hope without rushing to that happy ending.
I really enjoy the chapters where she has these small revelations that are positive and warm her up, moving that needle a little closer. And, really, who isn't a sucker for Patient Jim, right?
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2018 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh Cece you little spitfire you. I love the way you had her in this chapter. Full of life, love, and energy. Something both Pam and Jim need. Sometimes it takes the innocence of a child to make us see what's important. Like I said with the last chapter I love how you're showing Jim and Pam's bond. How strong it is, even during such a difficult time. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Cece is my favorite part about this story. And it's not even the real Cece. Thanks love :)
1 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2018 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ooh, I’ve been waiting for this update. It’s a relief for her to know the full scope of her situation, and to have some closure with Roy.
I like your Penny, she’s tough but sweet.
I cannot wait to read more, and see how she deals with Jim now that she knows (most of) the truth.
Amazing stuff, thank you for posting this chapter!