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I think I’m going on round 4 or 5 with re-reading this story. *fans self*
It’s sooo good. Dialogue on point, descriptions flow without being too long winded. Makes me love our lovers that much more.
Amazing work.

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I love how you've got them so very sweet together. Ah young love. This story has become like a fine wine, it's only getting better with age. We're past exploring the vintage to see if it's a good year or not. Finding it to be of exceptional quality the case has been bought and laid in the cellar to rest and mature. As each bottle is brought forth in time the notes that were there in the first tasting continue to entrance, while the newer notes that can only be brought about with time are being detected in the tasting. Salud.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what to make of the fact that your review is more elegant than half of my entire story, but thank you so much. Now I want wine.

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Once you get the hang of bouncing between the two POV's I think it worked well. Saves having line breaks to switch POV's or having to write two chapters for each one. That said wonderfully detailed and descriptive. Lots of good internal thoughts that made it all so very sweet and sensual. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I'm glad it eventually worked, ha. I figured since I've been generally bouncing between them, with the occasional third person thrown in, we'd want to hear from both of them on their first--erm, second--time. Thanks for sticking with me! :)

9 minutes. *giggles*

Listen, I think we can all agree that Taco Bell is a magical place where wonderful things can happen. And the image of Jim folded into the backseat of a Saab is pretty dang magical.

Add Jim's "I'll wait as long as you need me to" speech to the top of his Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend list because everything he said here is swoon-worthy.

Author's Response:

I was going to make it 7 but figured I'd give them the benefit of the doubt. 

But yeah. Something about making their first time all magical and sh*t didn't seem right. I had to throw in a curveball. 

I think we just need to keep a running tab of "Jim Halpert's Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend," honestly.

Taco Bell is magical under the right circumstances. Like when cheese is involved.  

Sexy, sweet, sensual, loving, pick your adjective. Excellently written. Looking forward to seeing what else these two get up to. ;)

Is you or them that are going to be burning up here soon? I can't help but feel that you've got something long and hard planned to build up to the climax of this story and beyond. ;) Sorry, couldn't resist.
Anyway, adding my own two cents in, out in the woods just off a public hiking trail behind some bushes.

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Loving this story! I'd like to hear both their thoughts on the whole taking-it-slow idea at this point. Also: back seat of a car?

Author's Response: Thank you! You’ll see all of this in the near future 😉

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Sorry it's taken me so long to write a review for this story. It's turning into one of my favorite guilty pleasure stories to dive into. The back and forth banter they have is great as well as their clear love for each other. Very clear descriptions that make it easy to see what they're up to.

AGIAN MARIE! (I too, like using full names and Marie is a solid middle name for scolding anyone, right?)

I’m not scolding you though. I’m too impressed. How did you manage to write a chapter that was so damn sweet and adorable but at the same time, completely inappropriate in the best of ways? That’s talent.

I was completely entertained by this chapter, especially Jim’s housing and lingerie reviews. And who doesn’t love a solid Friends reference?

Author's Response:

Oddly enough, you guessed my actual middle name on the first try. Oops~

I can’t even answer that question. This entire chapter just kind of manifested into a big ball of sexual fluff that left me very red faced, so I’m glad it worked 😂

Jim’s little reviews were my favorite part to write! And I totally did the Friends thing on purpose. Glad you caught it 😉

Thank ya thank ya! 

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“Maybe candles are involved. Maybe they aren’t.” You’re hilarious. Really.

I love the back and forth, with each of them managing to get the upper hand... so to speak. Sexy times aside, I absolutely love the banter in this chapter.

James Duncan, indeed.

Author's Response:

I two-hundred-percent did that candle thing for you guys ;)

Also, full names are my weakness. James Duncan will more than likely make a reappearance.  

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So a thing I've noticed in this fandom is that a lot of people like to make Pam shy and unsure when it comes to this particular activity. What I love most about this chapter is that you went the opposite route. Not only is Pam all for it, but she's barely asking as she's more demanding it. And enthusiastically reciprocating.

Get it, girl. Get it all over that office next time. (Or eventually.)

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Well, Drunk Handsy Pam is a good time, isn't she? And here I was scandalized by Jim in the last chapter... Pam comes along and takes it up a notch.

I like it. I like it a lot.

Author's Response: Drunk Handsy Pam has a bit of a problem with keeping her hands to herself, but I don’t thjnk jim will mind too much, especially in later chapters... ;)

This is me petitioning you to write a "Jim Halpert's Greatest Hits as a Boyfriend" fic. You know, in your spare time.

Because, as this chapter proves...he's a *really* great boyfriend.