1 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2018 03:05 pm Title: i’m not in love
This is so sweet so far, and I love the idea of seeing them come to terms with Jim leaving without him having confessed how he felt. I don’t think I’ve seen that before! I loved the “funeral” scene, it was so funny! I’m looking forward to more of Pam figuring out her feelings without knowing if Jim feels them, too. Great job so far! And welcome! You’ve found a great community here and we’re happy to have you!
Date: June 12, 2018 07:52 pm Title: don’t waste your time on me, you’re already the voice inside my head
Oh Jim! He's so sad. Now I'm really curious to see how their story plays out going forward from here!
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:50 pm Title: if I hadn’t blown the whole thing years ago, i might be here with you
Oh this is new! I'm very curious to see how this all plays out with Jim going to Stamford before telling Pam how he feels.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 06:44 pm Title: don’t waste your time on me, you’re already the voice inside my head
This was a nice counterpoint to ch.1 and the titles are great.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 01:05 pm Title: if I hadn’t blown the whole thing years ago, i might be here with you
A nice start! I wonder how other characters (Michael especially) would react to a non-Casino-Night move to Stamford on Jim's part, as well as what brought Jim to this decision. Looking forward to finding out more as you continue! Also, sidebar, we don't really get to see the chapter titles until there is more than one chapter, so I'm hoping chapter 2 is soon so I can see what chapter 1 is titled ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you’re enjoying it!
Date: June 12, 2018 12:59 pm Title: if I hadn’t blown the whole thing years ago, i might be here with you
I love where this is going already! Curious to see if the Casino Night moment happens pre or post merger, or whether Jim and Pam will keep in touch when he's in Stamford. Also curious about how Jim's leaving will influence Pam and Roy's relationship. Anxious to read more :)
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 12:43 pm Title: if I hadn’t blown the whole thing years ago, i might be here with you
Oh wow! An interesting premise, with Pam assumingly having to figure out her feelings for Jim withOUT knowing his end things. I’m excited to see where this goes!