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So it's me who is bumping up the read count of this story lately. With the slowdown of new content lately I've gone to the archives to indulge in one I haven't read before.

I truly am enjoying what you are doing here - a AU period piece with our favorite cast and the Jack Ryan twist.

Your Jim here has his same lovability and gentleness with Pam yet is kick-ass and very hot with his JR side.

I've been enjoying it so far but this chapter I became really taken in with the way you paint the picture of the cabin. Your descriptive writing makes the reader (me) feel like we are there with them.

Also loving how you really get inside Pam's headspace and how she both is nervous and maybe angered to be drawn into the danger of Jim's world and yet always is still taken by the man she'd come to know and have feelings for - maybe not realizing the depth of them yet but at least knowing he'd become her closest friend.

Looking forward to seeing how this next chapter (and the whole rest of the story goes - always nice to read when it's all done - no waiting).

Again really enjoying this so far.

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Wonderful d84;a039;d84;a039;

The ending they and we deserved. Their lives are back to the ordinary experience Jim wanted, now with the happiness and fulfillment Pam craved even before she recognized she was craving it. Bringing it full circle was a really nice touch.

This is just Ryan to a T is the thing. Always convinced he deserves more, never wanting to actually earn it, totally willing to hurt people who get in his way or to help himself and contemptuous of anyone who won’t and their values. Like… canon Ryan is definitely a guy who would commit treason and rationalize it to himself if he thought it would give him a leg up.

You did really well building the tension here, and the action sequence is easy to visualize and definitely had me at the edge of my seat.

You’ve done a really good job with the description in this story. I can perfectly picture the harrowing drive down the mountain with Jim lying bleeding next to her, and feel her panic and determination and fear, and Jim’s guilt at having pulled her into this world because he just couldn’t resist being around her. And working in Jim’s Casino Night lines? For Pam? To Jim? While he might be bleeding to death? I mean, damn. And then having him say I can’t before passing out? Too much.

Phyllis still name-dropping Bob Vance of Vance Refrigeration in nurse form was a needed bit of comic relief – as was the extremely appropriate use of “you look like a trout.” AND Phyllis not liking her Angela. And I’m going to go ahead and assume Jon as a reference to Scott Foley’s fanonical character, just because there’s a lot of fun little Easter eggs here?

Jim waking up and immediately saying he loves her too! That’s a well-written and well-timed moment, especially knowing they can’t linger on it with their enemies still looking for them. This was paced really well with Jim immediately bringing them back into fight-or-flight mode. And as always, you’ve left us on a killer cliff-hanger that I’m happy I don’t have to wait around for a resolution to.

“Pam, you need to be keeping it still. I like when you have your arms around me, but-” his husky voice was cut off by Pam reaching for him again. Jim intercepted her with a hand around each wrist, gently pinning her arms to her sides as he moved above her. “Still. Do you think you can do that?”

Seriously, I need you to stop, those brain cells are important.

“Looked like he’d won the lottery when she kissed him back” and such a perfect Jim line, and it definitely describes a very specific look we see on his face a few times throughout the series perfectly.

Much like Jim, I love the banter here, and the joy they take in it.

You’ve done well throughout this building in some of the beats of canon, and this is an intriguing use of the scenario from The Job. Also, the fact that you’ve worked in the scenario from The Job made me inherently suspicious of Ryan long before it became clear that Ryan provided most of the information implicating Josh. Also, I think Ryan killed Packer in Murder in Savannah. Ryan sucks.

This little moment at the end where Jim is just moved by the idea that Pam thinks of them as a we and the danger to her because they’re a we is just… it’s a really good way to end a chapter.

Ah, man. This is just a really well-crafted backstory and plot.

You did really well here letting us feel Jim's loss of his brother, and giving us a sense that Jim is driven by the people he loves. (Like you, Pam. He loves you.) And I really appreciate that Jim is a genuine teacher.

The nods to canon fit in really naturally here, and there were so many gentle Jam moments I really can't take it. Again, I am very happy I don't have to wait to hit the next button here.

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The cliffhanger makes me exceedingly happy I can just hit next here.

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This is SUCH a tense and well-done action sequence! You can really feel Pam's fear and confusion here.

And the detail of him carefully returning her dictionary to its proper place is just lovely.

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Finally getting around to reviewing this!

I really love the set up to this story. It's a really strong characterization of Pam (complete with little canon nods!), and you've totally committed to building up a story in one genre that will ultimately be in a totally different one. Just really strong writing.

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This was absolutely wonderful. Intense and sweet and lovely.

I love this ending! I can picture the whole sweep of the story, and bringing it back to the library is perfect. Thank you for this!