1 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2020 02:15 pm Title: A Quiet War
Awww, man. I love this one.
You've done some great (and HILARIOUS) work repurposing the details of canon into this world with everyone's code names (and Katy surviving while Roy died is the umbrella-tip-poison assassination of brilliant shots at Roy).
You did well painting a picture of the mission they're on so we can see it - and the reveal that the mother lode that they're after is artwork is very clever.
The details like Pam's sign for Halpert being based on heart were good, and the ending was pretty darn adorable for two badass CIA agents. Well done with this.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I loved writing this one (it would not let me alone until I got it ALLLLL out) so I'm so glad you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2018 09:07 am Title: A Quiet War
This was so lovely. A really great blend of two elements in a believable way with a sweet resolution. I really loved the mission they were on, too. I would love to see more like this from you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate hearing that. I definitely hope to write more like this sometime, maybe soon.
1 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2018 09:32 am Title: A Quiet War
I am loving so much about Pam and Jim in the action and suspense genres.
This story as a whole was wonderful but the details you come up with really make it. The reasoning behind their nicknames, especially Roy were amazing. And the signs for Halpert and Beesly... loved that! And of course the end when she could speak but was so used to sign, adorable!
If you’re ever up for a sequel to this, with them having to navigate a mission as a couple, I wouldn’t object ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun with the random details of this, and I'm glad it came through.
1 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2018 03:18 pm Title: A Quiet War
Well, I don’t know anything about Jack Ryan and all I know about AQP is what Wikipedia tells me but I do know that this was pretty dang great.
The code names were brilliantly fitting. As was the two of them on an art heist of sorts.
Love that when they can finally speak, they’re quick to find an *ahem* better use of their time.
This was great. It’s not my usual genre but I was captivated all the way through.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just woke up with all of this swimming around in my brain and had to write it up, so I'm glad it worked for you (especially if it's not your usual fare).