1 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2018 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I love it! These little Before/After stories make my heart flutter. Great tie in with title and theme. Whew! Chapter Two in that “You hurt me” exchange had a simple rawness that was so real. Thank you for sharing this.
1 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2018 09:26 am Title: Chapter 2
This is just so perfect. Fabulous job. I can’t imagine a better happy ending.
1 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2018 12:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg so please please please continue with this! It's so cute and emotional and your writing's good and argh!
Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed it!! i would be happy to continue, but i don't know what sort of direction to take it beyond this happyish ending. if you had any ideas on like a mood or episode/event that you could think of that you'd want to see in this format, i'd be happy to base something off of your suggestion!
1 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG this writing is amazing and so emotional!
1 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2018 09:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh the angst. I love it and hate it at the same time. These did a good job at capturing that feeling and I really enjoyed them. I wouldn’t say no to a happy ending parking lot encounter, though!
Author's Response: thanks for enjoying/taking the time to comment!! I was more than happy to oblige, as you can see. hope it's close to what you wanted :)