Date: January 11, 2019 08:00 am Title: Chapter 14
Very nice. I love the day after with Pam and Helene. Way to lay on the charm Jim. After all it's one thing to woo the lady, it's another thing to be accepted by the lady's family. Telling Karen off like that, yes might have been a tad harsh, but considering how she was acting, it was worth it. Good for this version of Jim to be secure enough in his feelings to be able to lay it out there like this. Makes for a very refreshing change of pace.
Author's Response: Roys bye bye is going to be a bit more in depth haha this smooth bf Jim is what I picture John to be in real life just total smooth bad ass, trying to get this and the next filler chapter out of the way and Canada here we come!!!! Thanks as always warrior!
1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2019 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
I took a bit of a reading hiatus (until I could post my Christmas fic) so I squealed when I saw a new chapter here. And aye, aye, aye. This new chapter. I applaud anyone who braves smut and you did amazing ESPECIALLY for your first time. {TWSS}
I really do love protective but also respectful Jim in this story. You've done a great job keeping him in-character by ensuring that, despite his success and financial stability, he's down-to-earth and respectful.
Ugh, the ending was so perfect. Really, really perfect. Please update soon because we NEED to know what happens next.
Bravo, girl!
Author's Response: Damnnn you just brought a tear to my eye!!! I'm so glad you read and comment!! And enjoyed the first time smut haha next chapter will be up super duper soon and I cant wait to read more of Hello My Old Heart! Love love love!!!!
Date: January 08, 2019 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was good (I'm not a big MA-rated fic person so I'm not going to comment further on that element) but I did enjoy the work you did on their respective thought processes. A larger point regarding writers' block: sometimes it's helpful to either go look at other characters (what's Roy up to? Darryl? Karen?) or to do a time jump (oh look they're on a plane again) to get yourself out of a rut. Just please don't abandon the fic ;). It's too much fun for that.
Date: January 08, 2019 11:36 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG! I’m so glad you updated, Iove this story. I really hope you update soon. I’m dying to read what Pam’s reaction is to the I love you, what happens with them living together. And I also can’t wait to read what Karen and Roy will have to say.
Date: January 08, 2019 06:31 am Title: Chapter 13
I like how protective Jim is here. That he just wants to keep Pam safe and take care of her, yet at the same time realizing she needs time to processes everything that's happened.
Pam's need to get everything out of her head seems very real in this context. Very descriptive writing that shows they have a very strong connection. Hopefully that connection will allow to tell Roy to take a flying leap next time she sees him since she's so clearly with Jim here.
Author's Response:
Honestly descriptive writing is where I struggle the most so this means a ton thanks again warrior!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2019 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 13
Amazing. Please keep this story going it’s so great. And this sex scene holy shit.
Author's Response: THANKS SO MUCH I kept putting it off cuz I was like it was gonna suck and finally we needed to get to the damn point.
Date: January 06, 2019 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ugh, Pam is having a DAY here isn't she? Roy's smarmy note to her apartment being broken into? Poor girl. Good thing she's got Jim there to step in and take care of her for a bit now.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: It's coming! Finally broke through my rut, new and long chapter with be updated tonight!!!
1 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2019 06:19 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm officially obsessed with your story! I stayed up until 1:30 last night reading it after skipping it several times because I didn't think I'd like an AU. Please write more soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so ,much for giving it a shot!!!! New chapter should be up soon!!!
Date: December 25, 2018 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
I haven't been reviewing chapter by chapter (sorry) but I have been jelly-beaning until I ran out. Just wanted to say I really truly enjoy this AU. I do hope you move us forward through the plot, as I'm fascinated by the whole set of plots and subplots you've arranged for us. Love what you've done with the P/J/R trio, as well as the company.
Author's Response: Hahahah thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! New chapter will be up soon!
1 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2018 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ooooohhhhh! I love it! I mean, I hate that Pam was robbed and is scared and is dependent on someone else and she has essentially had her security violated. But I love where this is going. And Protective Jim is apparently Hot Jim in my mind! I love how pathetic Roy is here. I love how nasty Karen is here. I love how you have written Andy so spot on here. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I love the fact that you review I'm literally fan girling haha! Thanks so much and yes yes yes when I originally wrote roy I like his way too much nd had to change it up so here we are and it's just gonna get better!
Date: December 12, 2018 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much!! Hope updates can come quicker
Author's Response: Oh yeah! Now that work isn't crazy they definitely will! Thanks for the love :):):)
Date: December 11, 2018 08:05 am Title: Chapter 12
Kinda figured Pam would get in trouble as some point with all the mention of robberies and such. Glad she didn't get more hurt than just some cuts and scrapes. Protective Jim is great. Roy remains terrible. Glad he's a country away in this story rather than just downstairs in the warehouse. Glad to see an update too.
Author's Response: I'm always astonishes how you manage to review so quickly with a newborn, blows my mind every time. Thank you so much for always reviewing Warrior means a ton!
1 [Report This]Date: November 22, 2018 07:35 am Title: Chapter 11
Oooo you know what I liked here? Even though Pam got upset and left the party, she told Jim right away what was bugging her instead of tucking it away. See, your story is this interesting kind of AU where we’re not wrestling with “oh, poor Jim and Pam who can’t speak their mind” and I like that. I also love the way you have the rest of the ensemble set up. I typically *don’t* like it when Jam stories have ensemble elements, because, well, I’m here for Jam, but you do it it so well, and it’s so entertaining and on point that I love it! Keep it up! I love this lil number.
Author's Response: A girl who speaks her mind right hahah Thanks so much for reading and sticking around!
Date: November 20, 2018 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, I do not like Mean Girl Karen here... what is she trying to pull?
I DO like that instead of freaking out too much about it, Pam did the adult thing and actually talked to Jim about it right away... that was unexpected in the best of ways... especially since it led to that moment on the desk.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Screw karen haha thanks fro reviewing and sticking around! :):):):):)
Date: November 17, 2018 07:22 am Title: Chapter 11
Man, I really don’t like Karen in this story LOL. I like all the nods to the show you included in this one. Will Jim and Pam be able to make a clean escape from the party? Can’t wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Right?!?!?!? She's the worst, thanks for staying tuned ;)
Date: November 15, 2018 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Lots of fun callbacks to the show here. A new version of Pam Pong. Andy, well being Andy regardless of what universe he's in. Kelly going ga-ga over anything she finds cute. Lots of good fun. I also like how Pam is a bit more forward here. Asking Jim directly about his past rather than letting things stew and get out of hand. The payoff for that on his desk was great. Still doing a great job with this.
Author's Response: The fact that you review with a newborn at home is amazing, thank you so much for alway taking the time means a ton!
1 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2018 07:07 am Title: Chapter 7
I think this is your best chapter so far. These two are sure in for a doozy of a meeting!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much fro reviewing!!!!! It gets quite interesting haha
1 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2018 06:45 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh! I like how you brought Roy into this! That’s a nice little twist and, yes, Pam should be able to see who she wants if Jim isn’t going to open his mouth.
Oomph! But then drunk and honest Jim at the very end. Something’s happening!
Date: November 07, 2018 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
“Ryan’s a tool.” I loved that they both thought that.
Uh-oh... Darryl’s getting suspicious. Andy’s being Andy, and well... Karen and Roy can both go jump off a cliff. Things are getting good!
Aw, he just wanted to see her! Love it.
Author's Response: Right?!?!?! RIGHT?!?!?!? THANKS FOR COMMENTING! Means a bunch :):):):)
Date: November 07, 2018 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
Why is Roy back in the picture??? Or Karen for that matter? Ok, I just really can’t wait for these two to truly get together. I love how you’re keeping us in suspense, but you also throw in some glimpses of what’s to come. Can’t wait for the next chapter !!
Author's Response: It'll be up soon!!! Thanks for commenting love!!
Date: November 07, 2018 10:31 am Title: Chapter 10
Nice little filler chapter here. You're doing a good job of portraying Roy being the kind of guy who seems nice but, there's probably not a lot under the surface.
I do like how you ended this chapter. Just Jim and Pam. Jim kicking out Karen just to have Pam come see him shows he wants to have Pam with him and it's adorable to see.
Author's Response: Congrats on the baby!!! And thanks for still finding time to read and comment :) gotta love Jam.
Date: November 01, 2018 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. Loveee this story!!! hope new chapters come out sooN!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much love!!! Welcome to the gang too! You'll love it here :)
Date: October 26, 2018 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
THEY'RE DATING. SECRETLY DATING.
I'm a tad excited. AND we're getting a karaoke night out with the office? MC, you're too good to us.
Stay sane during the next couple of weeks! Drink all the wine and take all the naps -- I feel like you'll have earned it.
Author's Response: OMG HIIIIII I love your story!!!! Thank you so so so so much for ready and reviewing!!! It means so so much and I just absolutely adore you!
Date: October 26, 2018 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ugh Roy. Do. Not. Like. I mean, I'm glad for Pam and this opportunity, but I don't want Roy anywhere near her. Nope.
What I do like is that as the day went on, Pam thawed out a little and wasn't so mad at Jim. And what I loved is that ending... get it, Sober Jim.
Date: October 26, 2018 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Drunk Jim noooo! Don't bring up Karen, not now! Oh, my heart hurt a little for Pam just then.
Oh, my heart hurt a lot for her as this chapter went on. That's not their best morning.