Date: March 24, 2019 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done story. I can understand Jim's point of this, holding his feelings back to be strong for her. I did the same thing when my ex had her miscarriage.
Date: November 19, 2018 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, sad tale. My favorite part:
“I’m sorry for scaring you” she said softly after a couple moments of silence. She shivered slightly as he gently grabbed her wrist and brought her hand to his lips, pressing soft kisses to each of her fingertips.
Awww. I can see this. :)
Date: November 19, 2018 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's an interesting tale. Miscarriages are one of those things that one just doesn't talk about. Yet still a life has been lost and grief is an altogether appropriate reaction. That you don't shy away from it in this tale shows that such grief is a natural reaction. That Jim and Pam turn to each other there at the end is comforting to see and a bittersweet way to end it.